Not a Story, Sorry

the Bean · 07-26-2007, 03:09 PM

sorry, this isnt actually a story, but whereelse could this go? I just wanted to ask whether anyone of the great writers on here (you know who you are

) could try and write a 3rd person story in the detail of the 1st person stories. I just wanted a story where we can experience the feelings of the other characters as well. PLease give it a go, but if you think its a crap idea scrap it.
PS Smile Guy is this allowed in the story section? sorry if its not but i couldnt think of anywer else to put it. thx

Smile Guy · 07-28-2007, 05:00 AM

That's quite alright, as now the place to put it is the Author's Cafe! So, yes, are any authors willing to take on this request?

Marc · 07-28-2007, 05:04 AM

Well, should be easy enough to do! I'll start thinking about it as my next project ....

the Bean · 07-29-2007, 04:04 PM

wow, loving the author's cafe idea. great job smile guy

Wcbrown514 · 08-10-2007, 06:14 PM

Actually writing in 3rd person is just like writing a formal essay and most of the writers know what that is. It would be easy, but it would take time to write it because it is a diffcult style of writing.

Smile Guy · 08-11-2007, 05:13 AM

Third person and first person writing is difficult to compare though...

Third person frees the writer up in terms of narrative, prose and flexibility in where the story goes.
First person can often ground the writer a bit more but as a plus it's much easier to describe a person's feelings and can create a more meaningful story in somewhere (writing through a rapist's point of view for example is pretty dark as they'll try and justify what they are doing in their mixed up head).

In the end I actually prefer third person but I often find myself writing in first person too.

the Bean · 08-11-2007, 05:35 AM

first persons easier cos u can put more personall feelings and experience into it

07-26-2007, 03:09 PM	#1
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	Not a Story, Sorry sorry, this isnt actually a story, but whereelse could this go? I just wanted to ask whether anyone of the great writers on here (you know who you are ) could try and write a 3rd person story in the detail of the 1st person stories. I just wanted a story where we can experience the feelings of the other characters as well. PLease give it a go, but if you think its a crap idea scrap it. PS Smile Guy is this allowed in the story section? sorry if its not but i couldnt think of anywer else to put it. thx

07-28-2007, 05:04 AM	#3
Marc Warning: Contains Nuts Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: London/Berkshire, UK Posts: 1,097	Well, should be easy enough to do! I'll start thinking about it as my next project .... __________________ Hugs! Marc Warning: May contain nuts. Likes: CFNM, WaM, Zentai, nudity, Cuffed, life model, body painting model, live TorD, being a naked chauffeur, to be continued.... Limits: No family, no work, no illegal, nothing beyond end of session, social suicide, swapping likes for dislikes, account control, to be continued... Dislikes: Anal, blood, scat, to be continued... https://www.zeemaps.com/map?group=150827 KIK: CFNM_Woody (mention getDare) Vote on my current poll, please

08-10-2007, 06:14 PM	#5
Wcbrown514 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the edge of Nowhere looking at Somewhere. Posts: 122	Actually writing in 3rd person is just like writing a formal essay and most of the writers know what that is. It would be easy, but it would take time to write it because it is a diffcult style of writing. __________________ This is a space in which I am supposed to write something funny and witty and everyone is supposed to read it and chuckle a little. (I am just telling you what it is for)

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07-28-2007, 05:00 AM	#2
Smile Guy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 440	That's quite alright, as now the place to put it is the Author's Cafe! So, yes, are any authors willing to take on this request?

07-29-2007, 04:04 PM	#4
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	wow, loving the author's cafe idea. great job smile guy

08-11-2007, 05:13 AM	#6
Smile Guy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 440	Third person and first person writing is difficult to compare though... Third person frees the writer up in terms of narrative, prose and flexibility in where the story goes. First person can often ground the writer a bit more but as a plus it's much easier to describe a person's feelings and can create a more meaningful story in somewhere (writing through a rapist's point of view for example is pretty dark as they'll try and justify what they are doing in their mixed up head). In the end I actually prefer third person but I often find myself writing in first person too.

08-11-2007, 05:35 AM	#7
the Bean Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: wouldn't you like to know... Posts: 160	first persons easier cos u can put more personall feelings and experience into it