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Old 05-25-2017, 11:46 AM   #2
SlaveMasterAllMost
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Join Date: Jan 2015
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Smile Write out Slave time

Hello, one thing I think you should do is "act" out the slave times of GRE. What I mean is that you tell the story from the perspective of the slaves after the truth or dare game has ended. I think it would be quite good to read, but if you decide to write another story I would love to help by giving advice / suggestions. I really enjoy your writing style and I hope you continue writing many stories in the future.
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