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10TimeZ · 03-13-2009, 05:31 PM

Pretty good story so far. Love the part where she falls on his lap, and the gentle tap.
Kind of short a bit, that's the only negative side of the story. But it could build up the tension =P

Good job! Keep it up. Can't wait for the next part.

03-13-2009, 05:31 PM	#6
10TimeZ Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 21	Pretty good story so far. Love the part where she falls on his lap, and the gentle tap. Kind of short a bit, that's the only negative side of the story. But it could build up the tension =P Good job! Keep it up. Can't wait for the next part.