[MasterMichaelNY]

You doing good girl, your thought is coming over nice and clear. But as a suggestion, use paragraphs more. It makes it simpler for the reader to follow along with your writing.

Also and look, you already have a captured audience.

Also I would like to point out to the other people reading along. On the top, there's a button, called thread tools. Click that and subscribe, so when she posts, you'll know right away.