Thread: Fiction: Master Jakob
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Old 07-12-2018, 10:12 PM   #45
kajindal
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Please do not mind
Initially i was liking the every part and always put myself in place of the slave's position
But now I feel that the story is getting boring, it seems like you are just stretching it.
Please make it exciting so that i can again think of myself as him
Sorry if that hurts you but i am telling what i felt
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