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Old 08-02-2020, 07:56 PM   #44
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Your plan to end on Friday then address the aftermath of the party as a separate volume is sound. I encourage you to follow through.

One suggestion, have someone read your posts before actually posting them. You have a substantial number of little errors (e.g. missing words, wrong tense, improper homonyms, scrambled syntax, etc.) in the text. You do really well at avoiding big mistakes but the little reduce readability. Having a second set of eyes review the text will eliminate the vast majority of these problems.
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