Wow great story !!! And i REALLY don't think i deserve credit you thought of the title yourself !! I just gave you the push 
If i'm honest i was expecting some grammatical and spelling mistakes but at first glance i can't see any ! Congrats !
As for the plot so far it's great ! All the imformation you have given us is useful for developing and not just pointless !!
And seriously "Chad" ? Jealous of the amount of stories i'm creditted for obviously 
So yeah in conclusion BRILLIANT !! You've just earnt yourself your first story stalker 
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[22:05:21] 1Pupil: Best moderator of getDare to me
One day when the light is glowing
I’ll be in my castle golden
But until the gates are open
I just wanna feel this moment
"Bdsm. That's were u get spanked!"
I love weiners and nuts.
"JMN is the one that most the tweenagers want to see in a kilt"
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