Hey,
This story seems very interesting and the start is different to the most on here. I think it has potential.
Would be nice to read some more chapters from you. Your mostly summarizing description is an interesting (good) way to write the first chapter. But in my opinion, you need to switch to descriptive language in meaning of actions/reactions/dialgues/etc. in the next chapter and keep that then. Just saying, before it's too late.
Oh and you should at least use a program for spellchecks, it's not just a random post, you're writing a story. Or you find someone who edits your chapters.
Good luck, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Love
oh, PS: longer chapters = very nice :3