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Kate's downfall
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03-02-2014, 02:04 PM
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res
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Been following your story recently.
It is a nice read, however I feel you are kinda overdoing it with the 'juices'. They are seemingly mentioned every second sentence.
Still a nice story - keep up the good work.
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