This is amazing Butterfly, i was hanging on to every word. I know i am just repeating the thoughts of others but It was very well written. I didn't feel as if you were writing a story, i felt as if i was watching it unfold and the way the story progressed, it was a very good pace. Not a dull moment and i didn't want to stop reading it for a moment, i was almost sad when i got to the end.
It really was such a twist that her husband was ultimately the one to fulfill her desires and the man she fell in love with online, was the one she already had in real life.
I loved it so thank you for writing it Butterfly!
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