I'll be with you every step of the way at least what I can. It's amazing how you make stories that are not overtly sexual yet still contains enough for people who want that. It's not something you see very often yet you can make mundane events such as taking a shower or even eating a bagel interesting. I'm also not sure if many people realize the little nuances that you add to this story. One thing I noticed in particular was when you said according to the instructions she received...received from whom. You have made this story very ambiguous and raised a lot of questions and that just keeps me coming back for more as I really want to know what is going on in this whole situation. But these cliffhangers...one of the reasons I enjoy your writing. 
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