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Old 07-22-2007, 06:24 PM   #1
sjsully06
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Default Rough Draft for My Book...

This is only a rough draft prologue for a book I am currently working on. So tell me what you think. And this has nothing to do with Truth or Dare or sex or anything, it is just a normal fantasy type book


250 million years ago, when all the continents of the world formed the super continent Pangaea, the world powers were united as one. The world lived and breathed as one, this was a time before wars, before the dinosaurs, and before the humans of today. The people of that time were split by origin, the Mecconeans, Jachins, Austoninans, Africoneans, Euopons, and the Lationos. However an evil was beginning to rise, an evil that pitted the powers against each other. For the first time in their history people began to murder and to fight. Wars were waged against the other powers. The superpowers knew that they must do something to stop the horror that had swept the world. They decided they must hold a world wide meeting. So they picked were to meet and when. The world showed up to see the epic meeting, not knowing that the evil had followed them. The world powers stood up in front of the masses and declared that they had to stop the violence that was running ablaze, they must stop fighting. Up until this time no one knew what evil was, no one knew that evil had a name, and its name was Galansta. The ruler of fate and destiny, the bringer of evil and destruction, and destruction is what he brought. As the powers were meeting with the world Galansta murdered the ruler of Jachin and the ruler of Euopon. The world blamed the other rulers and even more war waged. With only four powers left they knew that they must end the violence the only way they knew how. They destroyed Pangaea. They went back to the meeting place and they unleashed their full power, they broke the world into six boundaries, the boundaries that we now know today as our Continents. They buried Galansta in the middle of the planet where he would always burn and be trapped never to rise again. Millions of years passed only to see animal life, but one day humans began to walk again. They began to repopulate the new world, they filled up the six continents, but Galansta was still inside the planet waiting to emerge, and tats what he did. He found his way out and began his new empire, Antarctica. The world now had seven continents, or boundaries. But only one ruler, Galansta had taken over and was in full power. A group of people knew that this wouldn’t work so they began to seek out six stones, six stones known as the continental stones or the stones of unity. They were found at a loss of many lives, but the stones allowed the six powers of good to rise and fight back against Galansta. They did so and again beat him, but the battle that ensued killed off all life. The battle caused the stones to again be split up, one per each continent of good. But Galansta wasn’t a dumb power, before his death he created a stone, a stone that if found would raise him from the dead were he would continue his rule as leader. If this stone was to ever be found he would rise and bring with him death and destruction, and the only way he could be stopped is if the six stones of unity were to be found.
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The truth is that I may write amazing stories about bondage and other things like master/slave. But the truth is that I can write it, but I dont do it, so stop asking me to be your slave or master. Also for the last time when I do dares I dont do poo, painful, messy, or public. So even if I do wear diapers, I wont shit one...
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