[Joker50]

Like most things here the site machines will tell you if its too long.

Personally I like to read the story behind the story rather than just want some thing that starts;
She ripped her clothes on the barbed wire and stood naked in the field, took the vibrator from the bag she had tossed over the fence and then as her friends watched, brought herself to orgasm as she thought about how good it was going to be now all her friends knew she could be treated like the sub human she had always wanted them too.

And I prefer:

She ripped her brand new dress on the barbed wire as she crawled underneath it. She had lost the truth or dare game when she had admitted on truth that she liked to be ordered about, especially during sex, on her next turn they had offered her truth or dare and she had chosen truth but her friends had asked why she hadn't taken dare, when she replied, truthfully, she had a new dress on and didn't want to get it ruined, they had ganged up on her and told her it was a lame answer and had lost the game and a forfeit was required.

She removed her floral bra and panties set and then tossed the set to the girls on the other side who immediately ripped it all to shreds on the barbs on their side, laughing as they did so and then turning their attention back to her.
'You lost now, do as you are told and fuck yourself' yelled one.

She stood naked in the field, nervously looking round, as she reached for the bag she had tossed over the fence earlier. From it she pulled the vibrator, wiped her fingers up and down her pussy rubbing at her clit and then once ready she pushed the throbbing item inside her wet hole. As her friends watched she brought herself to orgasm, smiling to herself as she thought about how good it was going to be, now that all her friends finally knew she could be treated like the sub human she had always wanted them too.

Okay it doesn't make a lot of sense but you get the point: the trouble is writing like this uses space and so you end up with chapters.