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Originally Posted by 00infinity
Things are going way too fast between the sub and the dom, no girl would become a slave to a guy she just met in 10 seconds flat and then tell him to come over to her house alone, that's just asking to raped and the whole thing seems forced and unrealistic
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Ok, after reading that, I take back my first comment, I am starting to find this too unreal.. even for Fiction. At least have them chatting and dating for a bit first.
Slightly off topic, in my story about me being a slave[all true] it is later revealed that we had 1 week to get to know each other, before school started, then the Slave/Master thing began. It was slow. At my pace, but not taking the piss.
Smile, I'd rethink this story.. if I were you. But unfortunately, I'm not