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jack1989 · 02-26-2008, 06:56 AM

Disclaimer- This story is complete fiction and not based on any real life event. Any resembelance to any person, people or situation in purely coincidental and unintentional. This story contains themes of blackmail, rape, abuse of power and enforced servitude. If you find this offencive or it's just not for you don't read any further.

Dan lay back smiling, life was good, scratch that, life was bloody fantastic.
When he met his wife, Sheila, last year he didn’t see any future for them. She was a one night stand, he was drunk and hadn’t had any for a while. He woke up early the morning after and ran, ran so fast he neglected to pick up his wallet. He knew she was no supermodel in the pub the previous night, but he was appalled to see the overweight, middle aged old hag snoring and farting next to him. It was when he called round the next day, to pick up the aforementioned wallet, that he saw her- Louise. Louise, Lou as she was known was Sheila’s teenage daughter. Aged 17 she was just his type, she had a short 5’4 figure, the long hair hanging half way down her back had the colour and shine of a hazel nut glistening in the sun, her pale, slightly freckled flesh positively glowed, she had long shapely legs topped of with the tightest, most perfect backside imaginable. She had flesh in all the right places, while far from fat she wasn’t like the stick insects parading them selves on page 3 of trashy newspapers. Add to this the ample small C-cup breasts perpetuating from her chest, amplified by a low cut cotton top combined with a pink lace bra that was slightly to small for her and she was like a mini-goddess. His cock stirred as he got that first glance of her, quite how an ugly old shrew like Sheila had given birth to her was beyond him.
He looked down, seeing that beautiful head of hazel hair, and her soft lips, sparkling with gloss wrapped around his hard cock, at that moment he exploded, his cum filling her mouth, she swallowed as fast as he delivered.

More to come, I've already written a considerable amount of this story but I'd like to get some feedback between installments and see if this is going down well.
Also the title of this is rather unoriginal, if anyone has any better idea's please let me know.

02-26-2008, 06:56 AM	#1
jack1989 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 8	The step-daugther [fiction] Disclaimer- This story is complete fiction and not based on any real life event. Any resembelance to any person, people or situation in purely coincidental and unintentional. This story contains themes of blackmail, rape, abuse of power and enforced servitude. If you find this offencive or it's just not for you don't read any further. Dan lay back smiling, life was good, scratch that, life was bloody fantastic. When he met his wife, Sheila, last year he didn’t see any future for them. She was a one night stand, he was drunk and hadn’t had any for a while. He woke up early the morning after and ran, ran so fast he neglected to pick up his wallet. He knew she was no supermodel in the pub the previous night, but he was appalled to see the overweight, middle aged old hag snoring and farting next to him. It was when he called round the next day, to pick up the aforementioned wallet, that he saw her- Louise. Louise, Lou as she was known was Sheila’s teenage daughter. Aged 17 she was just his type, she had a short 5’4 figure, the long hair hanging half way down her back had the colour and shine of a hazel nut glistening in the sun, her pale, slightly freckled flesh positively glowed, she had long shapely legs topped of with the tightest, most perfect backside imaginable. She had flesh in all the right places, while far from fat she wasn’t like the stick insects parading them selves on page 3 of trashy newspapers. Add to this the ample small C-cup breasts perpetuating from her chest, amplified by a low cut cotton top combined with a pink lace bra that was slightly to small for her and she was like a mini-goddess. His cock stirred as he got that first glance of her, quite how an ugly old shrew like Sheila had given birth to her was beyond him. He looked down, seeing that beautiful head of hazel hair, and her soft lips, sparkling with gloss wrapped around his hard cock, at that moment he exploded, his cum filling her mouth, she swallowed as fast as he delivered. More to come, I've already written a considerable amount of this story but I'd like to get some feedback between installments and see if this is going down well. Also the title of this is rather unoriginal, if anyone has any better idea's please let me know. Last edited by jack1989; 02-26-2008 at 07:03 AM.