06-14-2013, 02:26 PM
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getDare Sweetheart
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Ireland
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A nice bit of background there, the story has good potential, everything is very well explained and I could really get a good picture of the scenarios you described.
It could be a bit longer and maybe if you spaced it out a bit it would be easier to follow and read, other than that I think it's really good and will be reading more
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