That was a really well-written, engaging account of an interesting and erotic scenario. It was beautifully paced and switching between Amber's p.o.v. and that of the watchers made it all-the-more readable.
I noticed your reservations about the story in your introduction, but I think they were unfounded. I assume you thought introducing Amber's sister to the scene was 'silly', but it didn't strike me as being out of keeping with the kink element of the story.
I, for one, am glad you decided to go ahead and share this excellent short story. Thanks!
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