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Originally Posted by redtiger
A very promising start. I like the uniqueness of the situation. Please proofread better, you have several typographical errors, missing words, misused words, etc. Striking an error of these types while reading throws the reader out of the story. Losing your readers to a misspelled word or the wrong verb tense would be a tragedy for a story with as much potential as this one has.
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Sorry about that. I used Microsoft word and its spell checker while writing it but it must not have picked up the mistakes.
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Last edited by brown mouse; 03-04-2021 at 09:59 PM.
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