UPDATE: last night I posted the two above chapters and then went to bed. I had a dream where I was part of this story. (that's how deep into it I am) and it gave me a new idea for the final round. It'll be longer than I had planned but will be more in-line with what the idea of the show/story was. I'll split the final round into 2 sections, just because even I got tired reading chapters 9 & 10 to check them, probably loads of spelling mistakes in them.
Any feedback is always welcome, and I will be continuing later today, once I have finished doing what I need to. So maybe the next part can be expected tonight.
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