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Coyote · 07-16-2009, 03:30 PM

Well heres the thing, too short to tell if it is going to be a good story. it is very rushed and kinda hard to understand. If you plan on continuing, slow it down, and just take more time to write it

07-16-2009, 03:30 PM	#2
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	Well heres the thing, too short to tell if it is going to be a good story. it is very rushed and kinda hard to understand. If you plan on continuing, slow it down, and just take more time to write it