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Old 07-26-2013, 03:38 PM   #9
Sanpow
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I think a very short description of a person is ok. But it's enought just to give one or 2 information, like "He opened the door and there was Sally, one of the hottest girls he know".
So you dont realy say how she looks like but you know "she's hot" so you have your imagination now. You could also use some other adjectives like "big", "tall", "small", "cute",... Sometimes age or just one simple thing so you have at least a idea of the person.

But what i hate: If the author starts with a list like:
Dave: 18 Year, Tall, 6inch cock, Brown hair,... etc
John:....
Lisa:...
...

I never read this storys because i never know who's who. It's much better if persons will be added slowly to the story.
And always with just a one-word-description. Some other can be added later in the story, like:
>>It was Lisas turn to chose Truth or Dare. "Uhm.. Truth" she said the shy girl, who usualy isn't the first person who chose dare<<

(sorry for bad english. Usualy write storys in german ;-)
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