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Originally Posted by kamita721
Minor wordsmithing:
"if you are not currently denied" -> "and you are not currently denied"
"during that denial period" -> "during that denial period".
Also, given we have the precedent that you can punish for mistakes, it feels like orgasming during the denial period also deserves a punishment; but I'll leave that change up to you.
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Made the change to the first wordsmithing, but I don't see what you want me to change on the second. They look identical to me. Help! As for an additional punishment... I would prefer to have something set so the consequences are clear. Giving out new punishments is exhausting when I'm not in the right head space for it. Let me think on it.