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interesting · 01-16-2009, 10:29 PM

It's a good beginning, though Collared_Slave hasn't touched it in a while. I find the beginning a little rushed, but it does create an ambiance.

Slave, if you'd like to pursue the story, I'm sure you'd have tons of readers.

01-16-2009, 10:29 PM	#10
interesting getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Somewhere between here and there, in Quebec, Canada... Posts: 1,662 Blog Entries: 27	It's a good beginning, though Collared_Slave hasn't touched it in a while. I find the beginning a little rushed, but it does create an ambiance. Slave, if you'd like to pursue the story, I'm sure you'd have tons of readers. __________________ You can visit my erotic stories website at: interestinglifestories.weebly.com This link can get you to all of my stories on this site as well: *Blog for my GD stories*