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Originally Posted by Rob
A very good story, but the grammar does detract from the reading of it. I love the idea, though it is pretty un-realistic (a girl getting a naked boy down from boy's locker-room shower, hot water in a school).
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i agree its a good story but very un-reallisic...the water at our school is why people don't take showers at our school, we sick to our Deoderant