getDare Truth or Dare - View Single Post - Face-to-face spin the bottle [Fiction]

FemaleSlave · 08-19-2008, 08:21 PM

I like this, you should have them leave the house and do a couple dares in public. I also like the lack of grammer mistakes, and how you made the "sex scene" detailed but not to graphic. keep it up.

08-19-2008, 08:21 PM	#7
FemaleSlave Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: USA Posts: 14	good job I like this, you should have them leave the house and do a couple dares in public. I also like the lack of grammer mistakes, and how you made the "sex scene" detailed but not to graphic. keep it up.