I'm sorry Leo for not commenting recently :/ I'm loving the story though and I was so hoping that the classroom was a dream as i was struggling to see the connection from holiday time to term time haha :/ My fav character is hannah just because she is so devious for one so young, i don't know why I love your story probably because it is so well written, my least favourite character is the teacher from the classroom he sounds like a piece of work :/ the very last scene I think would have to be my favourite just because the last sentence is so powerful
I've not found any of it boring and the only thing that I was confused about has been cleared up now
I don't know what I would like to see more of - probably more Hannah
. Again sorry for not commenting in a while :/ I would like to also be kept on the PM list if possible
As always cannot wait for more