yep, I totally agree
The length is way better this time.
I like it, nothing really to complain about this time :3
Looking forward to their conversation and whatever else comes next. :3
I hope he doesn't sit on the bed naked... (because you stopped right at that point where he sees him) xD
That'd be kinda... I don't know why so many people have that in their story... it seems kind of unreal to me... but maybe that's just me and people in the states are way more open about being naked... ... .. . not!
Love :3