Careful on the spelling/grammar... and seems a little rushed. Take your time - the best stories take time. Otherwise, a nice story for a beginner.
This time the note hit her in the head which made Fowlerstien mad because she doesnt apperciate things being thrown at her head.
and
The first dare Fowlerstien had to do was put penut butter in her underwear (which made her smell like penut butter).
made me laugh (this isn't a bad thing 
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