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Originally Posted by b0ris
Grammar my dear!
You're no longer talking, but writing.
their: ownership. It is their book.
there: indicates location (etc), Over there, not here.
they're: short for they are.
In the short text, you have nice examples of all three: - Their work requires them to travel every couple of months,... OK
- ..., so their was loud music playing... NOT OK, should be there.
- “Fuck their loud” NOT OK, should be “Fuck. They're loud”
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Yea i thought I wouldve made a couple mistakes, thanks for pointing it out i will do better next chapter
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