[Rachie]

Thanks for time in writing, as an author i understand the time and dedication this takes.

Good chapter lengths
Like the way you say to be continued, at the end of each part
Like the paragraph lay out
Good punctuation

Like the ending (of chapter) we know the dare, but still left in suspense over what she was going to do with the diet coke.

Hoping for more

Love Rachie
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