Sorry just had no insparation.
There was a vast room before me, very dark and dusty. Racks on the walls holding evil looking objects. Then i saw them: Claire Briddie and Loren standing about 10 feet to the side of me boy they looked stunning. Claire from head to toe in black latex, Briddie with a crop and riding boots. The loren with a short sexy black skirt and a matching tank top. The sight of her gave me a raging hard on. I looked over so had Marcus and Jack. I could't see Ben anywhere. I turned back and asked them 'Wheres ben?' Immeadiatly briddie walked up to me and slapped me in the face. 'Who the fuck do you think you are you dirty fucking slave' ' Ben's gone' she added 'He's Lucky'. 'What the hell are you doing' Briddie had started to walk away she turned back sharply and walked towards Marcus unlocked him then the same with jack. They were given back there clothes and Claire escorted them out of the room.
'From now on you will call us Miss' she spat at me 'Do you understand'. 'What the hell' I reapeated in a stunned voice.
'Rite that's it Loren punish him and make it hurt!'
Loren walked up to me with a cat'o' nine tails in her hand. She whipped me viciously for what seemed like an age. When she drew blood 'STOP!' i screamed. 'Stop what Slave' Stop Please.... miss' I added with a tinge of humiliation in my voice'
'Good' Briddie said 'Stage 1 complete'
What do you guys think. PLease give me positive criticism and any ideas you would like incorporated in the story
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