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Old 11-22-2020, 05:05 PM   #8
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Just checking you haven’t forgotten this, ‘cause he clearly did come during the last few chapters!

Maybe he needs punishing for disobeying that dare?
I think im the one who needs punishing!

I try my best not to include plot holes in the story but as you can tell I don't write very often so I forget what i have and haven't written, so I'll have to start rereading the whole thing. There will be more plot holes I think but ill try to fix them if they're brought to my attention.

Maybe i should just write more consistently?

Thanks for letting me know I hope you still enjoyed it.

Feel free to punish me for my errors!
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