Thread: Non-Fiction: Two boys + Sleepover
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Old 12-31-2010, 08:37 PM   #33
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Don't let it get to you. I got told that I was going to rot in hell for writing my story, so there you go.
I personally really like your story, and the grammar is great, I don't really get what they're saying about that.
If a story bothers you that much, there is a simple solution: DON'T READ IT!
@kinky: I love the story, and keep writing!!!
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