Wow Butterfly, that was an action-packed story and as the other comments have said, a great pace. I love the little humor parts in the story but I equally loved the way you write, it just made me want to get to the next line. I'm almost out of breath reading it. You clearly have a talent for this!
I also loved the emotional side, the husband with a tear down his eye made me feel sad but the plot twist!!! Now that was super clever
M.V