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Originally Posted by Looking4somename
It starts great, but u kinda lose me when poor what's-is-name becomes their slave.
I can just imagine myself waiting for them to slip, hitting them damn hard, tying them up real nice and giving them a payback like hell (also, making sure to ruin all the pictures, and if need be - to completly destroy the bitch's computer.)
Anyhow, real nice. Do me a favour and make sure he gets his payback time somewhere along the line. It's only fair.
Looking forward for updates.
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i agree with you man, it seems like with every story like this, someone ends up as a slave who is doomed to endless torture and never gets some payback. Someone needs to write a story where the slave gets payback, and i think this should be the story.