It starts great, but u kinda lose me when poor what's-is-name becomes their slave.
I can just imagine myself waiting for them to slip, hitting them damn hard, tying them up real nice and giving them a payback like hell (also, making sure to ruin all the pictures, and if need be - to completly destroy the bitch's computer.)
Anyhow, real nice. Do me a favour and make sure he gets his payback time somewhere along the line. It's only fair.
Looking forward for updates.
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