Some interesting and fair comments raised on the last addition -
The kiss between Steve and Jo caught Steve (and myself whilst writing it !) totally unaware, and it's a sub plot which may, or may not develop into something more. Other than some rough ideas, these days I just seem to type first, then think of where the story will go afterwards, but this seems to be working.
Likewise with the asking of the question to Kelly - I was trying to capture the awkwardness of the situation, and there is more of this plot to come next time.
In the meantime, it's nice to see that a chapter without any real action has been so well received - who says we're a load of sex addicts on here ?!? ;o)
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