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Old 03-26-2015, 09:41 AM   #2
Leland
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Interesting, there are a lot of creative dares, crearly you put a lot of effort and passion creating this dice dare. I'll probably give it a try one of those days.

I have some suggestions, based purely on a first and fast impression, so do not take them too seriously:

- 8L is unhealthy: I understand that is a slim chance, but there should be no chance at all. This line "If you feel ill at any point stop and perform the punishment." sounds unhealthy too.
- The minimum you could drink is a sip and the maximun is 8L: sounds unbalanced. Could be better something like 2L - 4L or less if you increase the average duration (that seems a bit low)
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