it's rushed, the plot is clichéd and the installments are short. the spelling is bad and you didn't even give anyone a name. sorry but this is one of the worst stories on getdare.
if you want to improve it try longer installments and more description.
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loves: mastrubation, humiliation
likes: mild pain, spanking
dislikes: piss,
limits: public, very painful, permanent/ long lasting, illegal, dangerous, poo
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