Opal's Crush (You decide what happens)
 

Opal: 16 yrs Old, Shy, Long Dark brown hair (always in a ponytail), Baggy Clothes, Older sister of Tyler

Tyler: 14 yrs old, Outgoing, Short Dark Brown hair, Younger brother of Opal

Annabelle: 16yrs old, Popular, Medium red hair, Best friend of Opal

Caleb: 17yrs old, Outgoing, Light brown hair, Muscular, Opals Crush.

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Beep. Beep. Beep. Sounded Opals Alarm. She hated Monday mornings, Especially this Monday morning. It was the first day of her sophomore year. Opal crawled out of bed wiping her eyes. She walked into the bathroom and turned on her shower. She stood in the shower for a few minutes before she had to get out to get ready. Opal dreaded school as she wasn't the most popular girl and was often considered as 'Invisible'. Opal got out of the shower after freshening herself up. She grabbed her towel and wrapped it around herself. She looked in the mirror at herself and decided she wanted to be different this year... more noticeable. Opal went to her closet and rummaged around till she found her tight skinny jeans and her black ruffled flower print crop top. She put her outfit on and looked at herself in the mirror. She then went to her dresser and grabbed her gold bangles and her heart locket she always wore. She then scrunched up her hair and hair sprayed it into place. She did her makeup as a natural look and walked down stairs. She found her father in the kitchen making breakfast for her and her brother Tyler.

"Good morning Daddy." She said as she sat at the table.
"Morning sweetie" He said as he turned around to put the eggs on the table and nearly dropped the pan.
"Wow you look... well you look like a girl.." He said
"Gee thanks dad.." She said as she spooned some eggs on her plate with bacon and toast.
"You look beautiful." He said with a smile.
She smiled and ate her breakfast. "May I have some cash to buy lunch at school?"
"Sure just take some out of my wallet." He said.

Opal grabbed his wallet and took some money out of it. She grabbed her bag off the hook in the closet along with her black cardigan and walked down to the bus stop. Once she got to the bus stop she saw her friend Annabelle.


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Will Annabelle Love Opals new change in clothes or will she hate it? You decide.

A. Love it
or
B. Hate it

I think that she should love it. I choose A. Also, please keep going. This story looks like it could be good!

I choose A i think she will like it.

I would love for it to be A

Thank You. Your so nice. :)

Thank you for commenting. :)

Thank you for Commenting.:)

Annabelle got excited when she saw Opal. Annabelle is one of the popular girls in school.. Why was she friends with Opal? No one knows but the two girls. Annabelle and Opal were great friends on a website that none of her classmates knew about called 'Getdare' Annabelle would often come over and they would play truth or dare with each other. Annabelle was average for her age with red curly hair and green eyes, She had a few freckles on her face.

"Opal!!" Annabelle said as she ran over and hugged her friend.
"Hey Anne." She said hugging her.
"Wow, You look great, I love the new outfit, It suits you." Said Annabelle.
"Thanks, I thought I'd try a new look since its the beginning of a new year." She said smiling.
"It suits you." She said.
"Thanks." Said Opal as the bus rode up to take them to school.

Opal followed Annabelle onto the bus and sat in the back behind Anne. She looked out the window till they got to Caleb's stop and she fixed her hair so it looked nice. As Caleb walked down the isle Opal looked at him and smiled. Caleb didn't look at her but kept walking to the very back of the bus before he sat down. Once the buss got to the school Opal got off and went straight to her locker. She noticed someone at her locker putting a note into it, She waited for him to leave before she went to her locker, She opened it and the note was laying on her book. Opal picked up the note as the bell rang, She hurried off to her first class.

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A. Should she read the note
or
B. Toss it

Pretty Good Story So Far!
I Choose A

I really enjoy it keep going by the way A

A she should read the note

I vote for A, who knows what the note might say.

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