I know this isn't about this story (and mods, feel free to delete it if in your consideration you believe it's advertizing), but I wrote a story with somewhat similar themes and I plan on posting this story, titled "Blackmailed Slaves for Life" on getdare later tonight. It's about a college girl and her friend who are blackmailed by a rich twenty year-old female to serve as slaves for the rest of their life. It sounds proposterous (how could someone be blackmailed for the rest of their life?) but I provided what I hope is a good explanation in the story. Anyways, if it interests you, check it out later.
EDIT: The story is up in the R18: Mature Stories section. |
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Now i picture them in the Old West and being the kidnappie of Kernel Sanders, or some really rich guy dressed in all white. Reason for the Old West: Grammar. Kernel Sanders: He scares me. xD |
I really don't care how people picture the Master. If you want to picture him as Colonel Sanders, then that's fine by me (I personally don't picture him as being old though).
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Its a great story tho. I can't wait to read more.
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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! This is like my ultimate fantasy come true!!! I LOVE IT! your sucha great author. If this story is unfinished... I honestly will lose a lot of interest in Getdare. Good Job! :)
-Slutty4life |
i like it a lot
i really like the story and would love it if you cep the storry going
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Please write more!!
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Im a fan
I absolutely loves you're story, you should continue writing or write another one!
I would really love to talk to you in private, so please please shoot me an email at [email protected] |
the story was alright. the surgeries should have been punishments for not accepting her new life. and one by one her mods transform her into a permanent pony girl. she was completely transformed in one paragraph and there was no background as to how she healed up. the cock blinders are a clever touch, but a tad unrealistic. where does all that cum come from? good content, but I feel you threw all your guns in the table too fast. but you are a good writer and your words are easy to transfer to pictures. be patient and let the story evolve. it was fun to read though. good job
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loved it
bring out more , id love that all done to me xxx
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ohhh yerrr xxxx , would have to give me a full sex change first lol
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Would love to read more!
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Please add more I love it
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