♥ Strip Poker with a Twist --- the Aftermath ♥ (no comments)
http://i.imgur.com/vKF9d.gif Purple - Yellow - Black - Orange - Green With over 2.4 million viewers of my previous attempts at writing Strip Poker with a Twist & The Sequel I’m proud to announce that the story is about to continue. (1 year to the day to the minute since the sequel began) Much apologies if posts are NOT as frequent as usual, due to heavy work load and family commitment. However posts will usually be around 100 words longer than previous – now 700 words (aim) All comments / ratings / thanks, are much appreciated. If the story is not to your taste, please keep reading many more exciting events take place. Brief - RECAP John had blackmailed 5 of his friends to play poker, however this wasn't to be a game of poker anyone would forget. With truths and dares beyond anyone's wildest imaginations. The first game finished with Dani being the winner and David loosing. Everyone had so much fun that they agreed for a rematch while also including 4 extra players. These included their new friend Amber who had recently moved to the area, blackmailing and tricking Ambers annoying brother Mark. Brian who had become close to Amber and Lucy who most players hated after things she had done in the past. The 10 players agreed to the extreme rules and the poker game began. With more revealing truths and extreme dares some of which still had to be carried out, the 5 loosing players were decided and the game came to a cliff-hanger finish. As the first player out of the game (looser) Mark slowly tore open the envelope to reveal the losers dare. Everyone crowded around as Mark gasped with surprise ........ The story will begin shortly. If anyone would like to expand a recap to help new readers, you are more than welcome. What will the envelope conceal, find out in the first part of STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST THE AFTERMATH. |
♥ Strip Poker with a Twist --- the Aftermath ♥ (no comments)
CONTENTS
PART 1 - THE BIG SURPRISE PART 2 - THE BLACKJACK GAME BEGINS PART 3 - DAVIDS KISS (PUZZLE: ADVENTURE ISLAND) PART 4 - THE PREDICTION PART 5 - WHO WILL LAURA DARE? (PUZZLE: CRACK THE POKER CODE) PART 6 - THE BLUFF PART 7 - ITS DOWN TO TWO PART 8 - THE LOSER IS DECLARED AND THE MAJOR DARE IS REVEALED PART 9 - THE FINAL PART OF THE DARE IS SECRETLY REVEALED PART 10 - THE DARE BEGINS (PUZZLE: RIDDLES WHAT AM I?) PART 11 - SEVERAL PLAYERS ORGASM PART 12 - A F*CKING GOOD EJACULATOR PART 13 - TIME FOR GOODNIGHT PART 14 - SCHOOL BEGINS (JOKE - CHRISTMAS) PART 15 - REVEALING OF THE CREEPY DARE (PICTURE: SLIDE SHOW OF PHOTOS) PART 16 - THE COLLECTION CONTINUES (PICTURE: SLIDE SHOW OF PHOTOS) PART 17 - MARK'S PLAN PART 18 - THE LOSER IS REVEALED (PUZZLE: GIFTS FOR CHRSTMAS) PART 19 - SARAH'S TEXT MESSAGE PART 20 - OPENING THE DOOR TO A BIG SURPRISE PART 21 - SETTING UP TOMORROW'S PLAN (PUZZLE: WHEN'S MY BIRTHDAY) PART 22 - PLANNING THE CREEPY EVENTS PART 23 - FIRST CLOTHES ARE STRIPPED PART 24 - 4 RULED OUT PART 25 - A SUGGESTION IS MADE PART 26 - THE CREEPY LOSER IS REVEALED (PUZZLE: STRIP MAN) PART 27 - WHAT IS SHE WEARING? |
I can't wait! I am so exited about all the new things they will stumbel apound.
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Yay :)
I was so excited when i saw the pm from you about this story! Looking foward to being able to telling you how brilliant of a writer you are as more chapters are released. :)
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Yay, thanks Rachie! A new (or continued) story!
*jumps up and down* |
Same as JMN, I saw the subject of the PM and I got so excited!!
I'm really glad your starting this up again! |
yay cant wait to see what happens this time
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Woo, can't wait for this. I got first thanks. :P
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Can't wait to read, so excited right now.
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YAY Rachie love you xxxxx :D
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Omg yes yes yes yes!!!
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Wow you are back, I wasn't expecting you to come back that fast :D I'm glad that you decided to continue, but don't let this story stop you from your other works. If work and everything gets to hard make a little break.
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This was the best surprise after a long day at work. Can't wait to find out what happened.
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cant wait for more
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Yay more fun reading. Can't wait
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Glad to see this is continuing. Thanks Rachie.
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Thanks for all the early support, it is most appreciated.
Now let the story begin … STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST THE AFTERMATH PART 1 (279 Parts in total) Everyone crowded around as Mark gasped with surprise. "What is it, what is it" Lucy asked excitedly. "I don't know, it seems like rules to another game?" Mark finally managed to splutter. "There's also another envelope" Mark continued, baffled at why anyone would put an envelope inside another. The look on each of the player’s faces was magical as the tension of what was going to be revealed mounted to almost boiling point. "Read the letter out loud" instructed John, who as the leader was the only player to know what he had written inside. Mark slowly began to read: The other 4 loosing players stared at Mark hardly believing their ears. Had they heard Mark correct, would they possibly have to do the big forfeit, what could it be? Mark briefly showed the letter to the 10 poker players. “Ha ha, I think John should be the loser in regards to his spelling” teased David, happy that he wasn’t one of the players that had to worry. John scowled at David realising that indeed he had spelt loser incorrectly. Looking around the room he saw that only one player seemed to rejoice in the letter, this was Mark who realised that there was a possibility that he was not going to be asked to do something horrid. "Well what is everyone waiting for, let the forfeit game begin" instructed John ushering everyone to sit in a large circle as they had been moment earlier. With everyone ready, John told the losers that he would be the dealer. Placing a chip near the 5 losers so everyone could easily tell who was playing, and possibly having the mammoth dare. Amber, Mark, Dani, Lucy and Adam sat nervously awaiting their fate. Slowly John dealt two cards to each of the 5 players. "Mark, as the loosing player you must go first" instructed John. "Twist please" pleaded Mark. John turned the top card over revealing a 6. "Stick" sniggered Mark with a huge grin. "Amber what would you like to do" John continued. "Well I would really like to see Mark performing the dare" teased Amber giving a totally different answer to what any of the players were expecting. "Are you sticking or would you like to gamble" snapped John who unlike the rest of the players didn't see the funny side of Ambers remark "I'll play safe" instructed Amber, meaning she was sticking with the two cards she had been dealt. "Twist" shouted Adam, as soon as Amber had finished her go. "Steady on tiger" called Laura to her brother who was obviously eager to get the game over with. John dealt Adam a 4, to which Adam asked for another card. The next was a 3. Adam sat there wondering what his best chances were. If he stuck at present he was sure someone would beat his hand. There was therefore only one other choice, "please can I have another card" he gingerly asked. John duly obliged and dealt Adam a 5. Everyone starred at Adam wondering if he could have a 5 card trick or was he bluffing and had actually gone bust. Adam of course wasn't going to tell the players what his original 2 cards were and the suspense mounted as the final 2 players began their game. "Lucy, you’re up next, what would you like to do" John snorted. Lucy sat debating, "I'll twist" she eventually said breaking the silence of the room as the players eagerly awaited to find out if Adams 5 card trick had actually worked. If his original 2 cards had totalled 9 or lower he was sure to be the winner. John dealt Lucy a king. "Oh cool" shouted Lucy trying to make out it was the card she was hoping for. "Dani, you are the finally player of this epic tense game, what is your decision" "um decisions, decisions, what would the rest of you do with a 10 and an ace? Dani asked teasingly. After a few seconds pause she said "I think I will stick." Several of the players laughed, not knowing if to believe Dani or not. Right then, it's soon going to be time that the winner of the first round is revealed before then though, I think it will be interesting if the players who haven't got to worry about this game have a little side bet. Everyone’s ears pricked up. "Oh more fun. I wonder how much more fun our naked bodies can take" whispered Sarah. "What do you have in mind?" asked David no longer surprised at how wild the evenings game had become. John smiled before answering, "Well I thought that we could .......... TO BE CONTINUED ....... What will the side bet be? Who will the winner of the first round be? Keep reading Strip Poker with a Twist the Aftermath for more tense fun. All comments are much appreciated. |
Oooooh another game, interesting! Glad to see another story. Keep it up :)
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Another game!!! Happy day! Looking forward to more!:)
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Thanks Rachie, an interesting start to the new story! Good writing, as always.
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I love blackjack ! It's an awesome game to play ! Oh yeah great begining to, what i'm sure will be, a great story :)
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So this is how it begins. Want more now it's started
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ooooo this sounds fun already
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Youve still got talent. can't wait to read
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i only just learnt the basic poker rules now i have to learn another game! anyway nice to have another story to read to make me horny lol xxx
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A great start :D most of the stories have a boring start buy you managed to make a good start. I'm waiting for more.
Btw I spell loser wrong too a lot. |
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Lovely story.
Wish all this could happen to me |
Dang Rachie you have the cruelest cliffhangers around. I like the chapter though. Can't wait for more.
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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! :D can`t wait to keep reading!! yayay!!
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Oh a new game, acts surprised. Lovely start
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Lovely attention to detail. Makes the reading even better.
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Great start - I'll be following it all right!
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Thank you for finding the correct answer. Please post "RACHIE" in your message on the story thread.
Make no other reference to the quiz You will then recieve a gold star WELL DONE STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST THE AFTERMATH Thanks for all the fabulous support. Please keep all comments coming, always most appreciated. So what does John have in mind? Find out now in ….. PART 2 (280 Parts in total) John smiled before answering, "Well I thought that we could maybe all predict who the winner of the round will be. Anyone that is correct may order any one player who's guessed incorrectly to kiss anything they like. "Well that may be fun, what do you call anything?" asked Brian wishing to know the full details before he agreed to participate. "Anything what so ever as long as it is in the house" confirmed John. Brian, Laura, David and Sarah all agreed to play and sat thinking who they believed the winning player would be. John handed a piece of paper to the 4 winning player and left one for himself. "Please write who you believe to be the winning player on here" instructed John. Soon they had all written their prediction and handed the paper back to John. "Let's find out who the first player to be safe will be" chuckled John. Mark went first revealing that his original two cards were 7 and 7 (+ 6 when twisted) giving him a respectable 20 "Lucy what have you got" asked John. She slowly turned her cards over revealing an 8 and a 4 (+ king when twisted) giving her 22. "Ha ha, you have bust, I knew you had" sniggered Mark realising there was therefore only three other players that could beat his 20 hand. Amber was next, looking relatively happy she revealed an ace and nine giving her a 20 hand the same as Mark. "Oh we have a tie break at the moment I wonder If Adam or Dani will be able to beat a 20" smiled John seeing everyone bouncing wondering if their prediction would be correct or not. "Well there is only one way to find out, Dani is it your turn to reveal next" asked Laura hoping for something magical. "I thought I had already told you what I've got" said Dani cheerfully believing she had won the round. Slowly turning her 2 cards over to reveal a 10 and an ace which is what she had told everyone she had got several minutes earlier. Dani therefore had a blackjack (21) and only a 5 card trick could beat her. "Right Adam you are the final player to reveal what you've got. We can all see that you may have a 5 card trick as long as you have not bust" John said building the tension. Adam slowly revealed his first card which was a 2. "If Adams final card is a 7 or lower he's won the round. If it's over a 7 then Dani will take the honours." called Brian believing that saying it out loud was helping some of the other players understand what was happening. Adam slowly turned his final card over and revealed a 6 meaning he indeed had a five card trick totalling 20. Adam you are the lucky winner and will therefore not have to do the mystery big forfeit. Adam sat happily already knowing there was no chance of anyone beating his 5 card trick. Dani scowled at Adam knowing he had just pinched the win from beneath her. There was nothing she could have done to prevent it as a blackjack (21) was the best hand anyone would hope to start with. "Right then, I think it's time to find out what everyone predicted" gloomily suggested John knowing his own prediction was incorrect. John slowly turned over the scraps of paper so the group could see what everyone had voted for. John - predicted the winner would be, Lucy David - predicted Amber Laura - predicted Adam Sarah - predicted Dani Brian - predicted Adam "Does this mean that both Laura and Brian have the opportunity to dare either John, David or Sarah to kiss anything in the house" asked Adam wondering if he had understood the rules correctly. "That's correct" smiled Brian wondering which of the 3 players he was going to dare. "Can I go to toilet" asked Sarah suddenly, bouncing on her knees desperately trying to prevent the inevitable (wetting herself). Of course she was still naked like all the other players and would only have made the red carpet a deeper shade of red as well as embarrass herself in front of her friends. "No, you can wait until the start of the next round" ordered Brian, as he started to make a few plans. "Okay, please be quick" Sarah spluttered hoping she would be able to hold it in. "Ummm who should I chose" Brian teased, going a little slower on purpose. "Oh I know, I would like to choose ........... TO BE CONTINUED........... Who did Brian chose to kiss something, and what? Who will the winner of the next round be? Keep reading Strip Poker with a Twist the Aftermath for much more fun. All comments and feedback are much appreciated. Part 3 includes the first planned puzzle |
Daily updates :eek: impressive
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I like the picture, I bet you had to put a lot of effort to it. Thanks for doing such a good job :)
Well I hope the next part comes tomorrow, I'm going to have a shity day tomorrow and your story would really make it a lot better :D RACHIE EDIT Unsure if the update will be tomorrow or Tuesday (48 hours) usually play poker with friends on Monday evening so depends where game is to be held, and if can finish typing and manage to email to friends comp for tomorrow. Hope your day isn't too bad. Thanks for all support - You and everyone else has given me. More soon Love Rachie x x x x |
I agree with 123, I can see that you put alot of effort into these pictures and I want you to know I really appreciate it. Anyways great chapter! Thanks for the pretty fast post!
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ooooo looks like someone gonna wet themselves
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love love love this :) soo soo sooooo good!!!! Thanks for continuing this story! :)
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Really loved these two updates :D can't wait for more rachie and good luck with your poker game tomorrow
RACHIE EDIT Thank You |
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