What A Good Ad Is Made Of
 

I'm tired of seeing no information, so hopefully somebody will actually read this. I know there has already been one posted, but I wanted to make one a little bit more specific in detail for the serious people of the world.

1. Info about the person posting the add
-Name
-Age
-Location
-Email/IM that you would be like to be contacted (Or say to PM you on here)
-Likes/Dislikes/Limits
-Are you a slave? Or a Master/Mistress?

2. What you are looking for in a Master/Mistress/Slave
-Is Webcam required, a plus, or not needed?
-Offline or online relationship?
-How willing must they be to commit?
-What kind of likes should they have?
-What are you planning to do with them?
-Do you want to treat them like an animal/be treated like one?
-Does time zone matter?
-Do they have to have previous experience? Or are you accepting beginners?
-Are you planning on really meeting with the person?
-Should they have good grammar?
-Is there a specific IM program they must use?
-Do you want them to sign a contract?
-Is there a checklist (Like Chloe's Kink Talk Checklist) that you want them to fill out to see things they like, dislike, and limit, that they didn't list?

3. Slave Specific
-What toys do you have to play with?
-Are you willing to go on webcam?
-Do you have a digital camera to take pictures with?
-Do you want it to be a long relationship or just a few nights?
-Are you looking for just a play master or a serious relationship?
-How much time can you commit to being a slave?
-Can you do offline tasks as well?
-Are you willing to have your Master/Mistress completely control EVERYTHING that you do?

4. Master/Mistress Specific
-What EXACTLY do you plan to do with your slave?
-Is there a certain age criteria?
-Does it have to be a male, female, or does it not matter?
-Is a webcam required of them? What about a digital camera?
-Do you want your slave to have a blog?
-Should your slave have daily tasks? What are some of the ones you might have them do?
-Are you going to be in control of absolutely everything that your slave does? Eating, drinking, using the restroom, ect?

Critic is welcome. End of post.

Note: * before the - means it was edited in.

Thanks. Ooh, I didn't think about using it for replies too. By you are right, they usually are just as crappy.

yeah, this is good. But I've found all the really good informational posts(like this one), tend to get ignored by the majority of the members here. They get read, and ignored.

Good job though.

It may seem that way but you would not believe the stats on the PM system. There is a LOT of PM traffic on getDare. Just because you don't see many public replies does not mean that these posts are not getting a lot of responses. I can't say for sure if these posts are generating PM traffic but I would assume they are. A good post puts you in a better position than a shitty one anyways.

I mean in terms of quality ads and intros... I've tried before, it was part of some of my Fiend's Eye stuff, and those have generated lots of replies... not many good ads. Hopefully this one will be different and actually have some effect, but... my experience tells me it won't.

I think that this should be stickied in the slave master section

I'll second that one... this is the kind of thing that should be read by all posting ads.

Yeah, I saw Smile's thing, this was mostly an add-on to that, if that makes sense

And, Feindish, I figure it will probably get ignored by the people who won't read it, but it was still worth a shot.

Good thread. Pity that for some male doms, no matter how good the ads are, you won't get many replies!

Okay. I think this might have helped. I just hit three good brand new adds in a row, one of which going along with the outline of this exact thing. Maybe it should be stickied.

Good thread I think! :)

Just so you know, I'm pimping this thread like crazy XD

yeah, I saw, and in glad. I don't have enoug time to look at all the ads, lol.

I like to read al the ads to see if they're getting better. If not is linky time!

This was definitely helpful in creating my advertisement. Thank you.
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I think SoftWhiteSlip
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=47347 made an excellent posting.

You would think that if the ad is well-written, then the response would be, as well. Unfortunately, this is not the case. ;_;

thanks for your suggestions.
 

thanks for your suggestions.

Yeah good thread! Saw it after I placed my ad... so hope Ive adhered!! :confused: :D

This is a great post, and even though I haven't even posted yet, it's good to see someone giving out pointers on ad posting.

Nice
 

Hi Jenna

Love your post.. I would very much like to get to know you more on msn...I'm sure I can fulfil many of the things you are looking for!

[email protected]

xx

this helped alot with my ad. Realized that my ad was lacking alot. :) Thank you.

Finally!
In all My years, this is the first UNDERSTANDABLE information list I have seen!!

:D excellent sticky

helpful

Good advice
 

Yeah, very helpful...

This is a great list for those looking to create an ad!

Thank you for this. The amount of ad's that don't have enough detail in them was really starting to annoy me.

Wish there was a way to make this post not only required material, but have members tested on it before being allowed to message :p

ME TOO! :D I want to administer the test!

i m about to make an ad ...this would really help me thank you.

Hey everyone, I wasnt sure where to put this so I put it here, I would like to know if my ad has been improved or not

1st try: I am a 18 year old english guy seachering for a female slav, any location between the ages of 18 and 35 who will allow me to use them at my plesure, I do not ask for pics straight away except as proof you are real as i would like to build trust between us first, however any pics i get would not be put online without your permission, I will respect boundries and limits of the slave in question. I am a kind and nice guy but will be firm and agressive whenever nessesary. If you require further information about me or what i intend to do with you just ask, but for a quick summary, i would prefer to keep it online intill we build trust, I would plan your day for you and expect you to keep to it, if you have a job, there would be certain rules for you to do there (which would not make you lose your job), I will eventually require you to send pictures and videos of you following commands. I do enjoy giving out punishment but only because it helps the slave learn for their mistakes.

I prefer to talk on kik, message me if interested in being my slave or submissive( PM or KIK).
If you can't talk on kik, pm me and i will send you my skype or email.

kik: unaidedfriend93

p.s: If you have any thoughts on how I can improve my ad please let me know

2nd try: My names James, I'm an 18 year old english dom living in the south of france.
I'm looking for a female slave in any time zone between the ages of 18 and 45 that enjoys being submissive (allthough i do like a woman with sass), will send pics and videos (after we have mutuel trust) and possibly webcam, the length or our relatonship will depend entirlly on how well we get on.
I am not bothered about previous experiance as being my slave will be an entirlly new experiance for you. I enjoy making my slave do menial and sometimes random things for no apparent reason. I have always used a safeword with my slaves and I never ask you to do something in your limits.
I wish to start our relatonship online but would like to take it offline if we both agree and there is mutuel trust). I mainly prefer 24/7 slaves but would be willing to negociate, I will not stop you from seing friends and familly as i believe that everyone should have them, I will give out weekly dares for the slave to complete at their lesuire within the timeframe. For slaves with jobs, you would be required to follow certain rules whilst there.
My likes:
Sexualized: Bondage, BDSM, roleplay, anal, boobs, female submission, humiliation, total control, public
Non-sexual: reading, relaxing, sports, gaming, baking( I'm a baker), racing
My dislikes:
Suxual: scat, bloodplay, choking,
Non sexual: brocolli, snails, fat people in lycra

please tell me if i've improved it

This group still up?