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sexyhoe 10-24-2014 07:02 PM

Great story! Keep going i am enjoying it.

issabella 10-24-2014 07:08 PM

another great addition thanks for the longer additions lol keep it going!!!!

LitDarkness 10-24-2014 07:56 PM

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Originally Posted by greenmist13 (Post 1536238)
another great addition thanks for the longer additions lol keep it going!!!!

Attchually it's the same length it always has been, just looks longer due to the spacing. They're the same length, the spacing just decieves the eyes. :D

issabella 10-24-2014 11:02 PM

ahhhhhh i seee i see xD

LitDarkness 10-25-2014 09:24 AM

Chapter 30:Not Real

I heard laughing. I was wondering what was so funny.

I told myself,"Ignore it." as I heard more laughter but I couldn't resist.

I walked towards the laughter into the teachers lounge. I hid behind furniture to avoid being seen, even though I knew a girl covered in duct tape wouldn't be hard to see.

I saw Mr.Varghese talking to another teacher, "Madonna, she thinks she knows better than the teacher."

The other teacher laughed,"So that's why you sent her here?"

He rubbed his hands together, "Yes, and all I had to do was change her grades to do it." I was wishing I had a recorder to record him.

The other teacher flipped through a wad of cash, "And we get payed more for more brats that are entered here."

Mr.Varghese stood up and turned around. I dunked as I was right behind him, "I could've swore I heard something." He walked towards me, I scooted back until my head was touching the wall.

He kicked the couch pushing it on me. I bit my cheeks in order not to scream.

He walked out of the room but dropped his cell phone.

I thought,"Yes." I quickly grabbed the cell phone and called the police.

At the end of the conversation they said they'd investigate the next day.

I couldn't wait for people to find out about this hell house.

LitDarkness 10-25-2014 10:02 AM

Chapter 31: Investigation
I snuck back to my room. Mr.Varghese was standing waiting for me. “Well, well, well, look who left her room. I knew you’d leave.” He clenched his teeth, “You will learn, Madonna!”
He lifted me over his shoulder and took my outside.

I shivered as he forced my back against the cold hard pole. He wrapped tape around my body. I tried to move but, there was no way I could even stretch.

He laughed, “Night Madonna.” He went inside the warm building. It was hard for me to sleep as I was only protected from the cold by two layers of tape.

When I finally fell asleep I was woke by sirens.

A police officer untied me, “Who tied you here ma’am.”

I trembled, if Mr.Varghese got away with this he was going to kill me. “I don’t know his first name but his last name is Varghese.”

He patted me on the back, “Ma’am we’re going to take you inside.” He escorted me inside.
Mr.Varghese was staring at me. He shook the police officers hand, “Hello officer my name is Turner Varghese. What brings you here today?” I hated that man and his charm. I knew I was going to be the one in major trouble at the end of this.

The police officer must have felt my unease because he patted me on the back, “Well, Mr.Varghese we need to investigate this school, so may I kindly ask you and everyone else to get out.”

His face dropped, “That may take a while as this school is big and the students are deep sleepers and disobedient.”

The police officer smiled, “That’s okay, I can investigate with people in here then, I’m negotiable.”

He glared at me, “I can get them out, you just may have to wait a while.”
The police officer ignored him and started scanning the school.

Mr.Varghese whispered in my ear, “You’ll be lucky to breath when I’m done with you, if anything happens.”

qt31415926 10-25-2014 01:22 PM

Tension!! I like it.

issabella 10-25-2014 01:30 PM

ohhhhh i cant wait for the next edition keep it going!!!

silkysatin 10-25-2014 02:36 PM

This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!

silkysatin 10-25-2014 05:27 PM

This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!

LitDarkness 10-26-2014 08:30 PM

Chapter 31: Discovery

Mr.Varghese grabbed my ear and pulled me outside. He glared at me, "Listen and listen good, you are not funny, you are not clever, I will make your life a living hell for this."

I smiled,"Face it you know, you're going to get caught, so you're trying to scare me."

He hit me on the back causing me to shriek in pain. "I will kill you."

The police officer came out escorting teachers out, they were in handcuffs. He lead them outside. Other police cars parked at the school. Teachers were forced into the police cars.
The police officer looked at Mr.Varghese, "Records indicate you're the leader of this establishment, you are under arrest."

He protested,"I have a wife, and kids, you can't arrest me, what about them."

The police officer handcuffed him,"You should of thought of that before committing a crime."
He escorted Mr.Varghese to his police car. The police cars left except for that one officers police car.

He stayed and got all the students out of the building. He sat beside us until our parents came.

I was relieved when I got to go home.

LitDarkness 10-26-2014 08:39 PM

I hoped you liked it.
 
I hoped you guys liked the story. I know it was short but I tried to make it detailed and interesting as possible.

Any feedback and constructive criticism will be appreciated.

Rose_Angel 10-26-2014 08:44 PM

I suspected an end was coming.

It was great for what it was worth! Thanks!

chocolatedispenser 10-26-2014 08:51 PM

It was really cool!
you could make a second part (hint hint!)

ClaraAnne 10-26-2014 09:59 PM

I really liked it. Was the 'Academy' word purposely misspelled as 'Acadamy'? It was great you could update the story regularly. :-) Thanks for spending the time to write it.


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