geat story
 

I love this story and can't wait to read me

Hey readers,
I'm very sorry for the long waits. Like I've said before I promise this story will never die until it's at the end. It's just that it's going to take sometime for me to finish typing it.I barley have time to get on anymore because I've been busy with school, my job,& other volunteer work. So just be patcient, & I'll have my next chapters up soon as I have the time to write them. Thank you all so much for reading my story, & I'm gald that you like it. :)

It's hard to get me to like a story, buy you have got me addicted to this story!!

just read the whole story right now. really good! continue please(:

Well as far as i am aware, the common grammar rules dictate, so as to avoid accent-based disputes, that the word "An" is only to replace "A" when preceeding a word with a beginning letter that is either a vowel, or, despite being often overlooked, "h".

Ergo:

An example,
A fruitful experience,
and An harrowing result.

I'm not sure if I like this story or not? This poor little sister is being abused and treated like an object by all but her boyfriend and even he doesn't seem to be sticking up for her much the poor thing :(
Still an intriguing read however, please continue.

New Characters
 

Characters


Zacarie: Is 16, gay. Friends with Cathryn, Trey, James, Jeremy, and Kaiden. He has short dirty blond hair (to his ears), green eyes, 5"6, white/caucasian, and is very slim/muscular.


Justin: Is 18, straight. Cathryn's ex-boyfriend. Friends with Logan. He has very short brown redish hair, green eyes, 5"9, white/caucasian, and is slim/very muscular.

Chapter 11
 

Me, James, Trey, and Jordan are all sitting on the floor in the middle of the living room. Kaiden comes back in the room, and sits the blow of water infront of us. Jeremy also comes back with 4 razors, 4 towels, and 4 bandanas. He gives Kaiden, Logan and Bradon each a towel and a razor. He hands a bandana to Jordan, Trey, and James. Then comes behinde me and ties a bandana around my head using it as a blindfold.

Cathryn: (trying to keep Jeremy from blinde folding me) Jeremy, stop. What are you doing?!?

Jeremy: Cat, let go. Just calm down. Kaiden can you hold her hands down for me?

Kaiden: Sure. (Kaiden kneels down in front of me and grabbs my hands, holding them down)

Jeremy: Theres been a change of plan. No one on your team gets to know who shaves them. So your each going to be blindfold, until your each done being shaved. (Jeremys finally done tying the blindfold) Don't even think about untying it.

Kaiden lets go of my hands and I feel him walk away. I couldn't see anything, everything was pitch black. Jeremy tied it so tight it felt like the blood vains between my head and my eyes were going to pop. I try to tugg on the bandana a bit to loosen it, but someone grabbs my hand to stop me.

Jeremy: Cathryn don't touch the blindfold. If I have too I'll go get some rope to tie your hands togeather. Do you want me to tie your hands?

Cathryn: No. I'm sorry. It's just, you tied it too tight, and I was just trying to loosen it a bit. (Jeremy loosens the blindfold a bit)

Jeremy: There is that better?

Cathryn: Yeah.

Jeremy: (pushes my shoulders to lay down) Now lay down, and keep your hands by your side.

Cathryn: Okay. (I do as Jeremy says)

I'm now laying on the floor, hands by my side, and can't see a thing. I start to hear the sound of shaving cream being squirted out from the cans. Not knowing who it was, I feel someone rubb the shaving cream on top of my vagina. It felt cold, and a bit weird. I never had anyone shave me before. I never even shaved myself down there before, I only trim. I then feel the razor wiping the shaving cream off, as it cutts the hairs off. As seconds went by who ever shaved me was done. They cleaned me off with a towel, and I feel someone else come behinde me to help sit me back up.
Jeremy: Lift your butt up. (I do as he says, and some one else is holding my waste up, so I wont sit down)

Cathryn: What are you doing?

Jeremy: You are to sit on your hands until the others are finished. Should help keep you to not touch your blinde fold. (He puts my right wrist under my butt. I feel a sharp pain as he grabbs my left wrist)

Cathryn: Ow, Stop! Your hurting my wrist.

Jeremy: Oh, yeah. Sorry, I forgot. (they put my waist back down, making me sit on my right hand) Just don't move it. (He sits my left wrist down by my side)

Cathryn: It hurts to move at all, and now hurts even more thanks to you.

Jeremy: I'm really sorry. (I feel him pick my wrist back up and kiss it) There does that feel better?

Cathtryn: (couldn't help but smile. Jeremy hasn't kissed any of my booboos to make it feel better, since I was 12) Yeah, thanks.

Jeremy: Good. Now just stay still Okay? Were almost finished.

Cathryn: Okay.

I hear Jeremy walk away. As minutes went by, I finally felt someone come behinde me again, and start to untie my blindfold. I looked behinde me and it wa Kaiden, he finally took my blindfold completely off and walked away. I liked that I was finally able to see again. Evidently everyone had there blindfold off before me, because everyone else was sitting back down on the couches. James was sitting next to Trey and Jordan, so I sat down on his lap.

James : Hey babe. (James couldn't help but to stare at my vagina) Mmmm, lookin sexy. (He wraps his arms aroud my wast and kisses me on the cheek)

Cathryn: (joking) Down boy. Maybe if your good we can have some fun later on tonight. (James kiss me on the lips)

Jeremy: (talking to me) I'm thinking about taking the lock off your door.

Cathryn: (I roll my eyes at Jeremy's comment) Haha very funny.

Trey: Hey Jeremy, is it okay if Zacarie can come over?

Jeremy: Yeah sure.

Cathryn: Zacarie's coming?

Trey: Yep, I just got a text from him. He said that he'll be here in a couple of minutes.

I was glad to hear that Zacarie was coming over. He's another good friend of mine. I havn't seen him since the last day of school. We use to be neighboors, but he had to move to a different neighborhood.


Jeremy: Does he know what we've been doing?

Trey: Yeah, I told him. If thats okay.

Jeremy: It's cool. I actually meant to invite him, but I didn't have any way of contacting him.

Kaiden: Jordan, it's your turn to pick the dare.

Jordan: Okay. I dare all of us to go skinny dipping.

Amazing story I would love to hear more

Hm :/ disappointed when i saw i was at the end.....cant wait for you to write again (: i couldnt stop laughing! ^_^

Chapter 12
 

We all get up, get a beach towel from the closet, and walk out to the pool. Everyone jumps in except me, I walk over to the shallow end and sit on the bottom of the stairs.

Jordan: (swims over to me) Whats up Kit Cat, aren't ya gonna come in?

Cathryn: I can't. It's kind of hard to swim with just one arm.

Jordan: (takes hold of my right hand, and starts walking into the pool) Come on, you can atleast just stand in the shallow end.

Cathryn: I guess that's okay, but I don't want to go under the water.

Jordan: Okay. (We get half way at the end of 4ft. He lets go of my hand and I hold on to the edge of the pool)

All of the guys are still in the deep end (at 8ft), goofying off. The then all start swimming over to me.

Jeremy: (puts his arm around me) Hey sis. So we've decided to stay around where you're able to touch, so you wont be left out.

Cathryn: K, I don't care. But thanks, I guess.

Jeremy: Bradon, it's your turn to pick the dare.

Bradon: Okay. (Sees the vollyball net) I dare all of us to play a game of volleyball. And when we take our showers after this, the loosers get to wash off the winners.

Kaiden: That sounds intresting.

James: Wait, but Cathryn won't be able to play because of her wrist.

Bradon: Oh, yeah. She can sit out.

Kaiden: How about we wait until Zacarie gets here, so he can take Cathryn's place. Then know one on our team will have to sit out.

Bradon: Okay, that's cool.

Logan: Until then, how about just a fun game of chicken fight.

Jeremy: Okay.

Logan: Me and James, agianst Bradon and kaiden.

Cathryn: Wouldn't it be hard for a midget like you, to hold a giant streen bean... (I immediatly cut my self off, when I just relized I accidently called James a giant streen bean)

James: (comes close to me, almost up in my face)What were you just about to call me?

Cathryn: Nothing... I love you.

James: A giant streen bean? You know I hate being called that.

Cathryn: (trying not to laugh) I'm really sorry. I didn't mean for it to come out that way.

Logan: Haha, thats what she said.

Cathryn: Ew, you're such a perv.

James: I think I might have to get you back for that.

Cathryn: (jokingly) Oooh I'm so scared.

James: You ought to be. I think I'm gonna have to tickle you. (James holds me close around his right arm, and starts tickling me with his left)

Cathryn: (laughing) No, James. Please stop. I'm sorry.

James: (laughing at me) Say Uncle.

Cathryn: (trying to get away from James) Jeremy, help me. James, please stop. I love you.

James: (stops tickling me, and holds me close in his arms)I know. I love you too. (kiss me on the lips)

Logan: Now I know where Cathryn's tickle spots are.

Cathryn: Logan, don't you dare even think about it.

Logan: Okay. So James, are ya playin or not?

James: I don't know. (turns me around to where my back is against his chest, and puts his arms around my waste) I think I want to stay here with my kitty cat.(kisses me on the cheek)

Logan: Ew. Okay. Then Me and Jordan, against Kaiden and Bradon.


Bradon and Kaiden: Okay.

Kaiden gets on Bradon's shoulder, and Jordan gets on Logan's shoulder. They move down to 6ft deep. Just as they were about to start the the fight, our front door bell rings, causes to distract Jordan and makes him fall off Logan's shoulder.

Jeremy: Cat, can you go get that? It's probably Zacarie.

Trey: That's wierd. Zacarie said that he would come around back to that door. (points at our door, that goes out into the back yard)

Cathryn: Okay. I'll go see who it is. (James lets go of my waste. I walk up staris out of the pool. I dry myself off, and wrap my towel around me.) Logan where did you put my clothes?

Logan: There in the living room, laying ontop of the couch.

Cathryn: K, thanks. I'm just going to put them back on to answer the door. I'll be right back.

I leave the pool, and enter the living room. I see where Logan had left my clothes, and quickly put them on before answering the door. The doorbell rings again.

Cathryn: (thinking it was Zacarie, I open the door) Hey Zacarie... (In dissapointment, I see that it wasn't Zacarie, it was my ex-boyfriend Justin) You're not Zacarie. (I'm a bit confused of why he was here)

Justin: (ignoring my comment) Hey.

Cathryn: I thought you're suppose to be in prison.

Justin: I was, but I'm out now. Since I've been good, they let me out early. I'm just on probation now.

Cathryn: Oh. What are you doing here?

Justin: I need to talk to you. Are you here alone?

Cathryn: No. My brother, and his friends are out back at the pool. What do you want?

Justin: Oh. Okay. Can I come in?

Cathryn: No. You're not welcomed into my home. I think you should go. (I start to close the door, but justin stops me)

Justin: No. I'm not leaving until I talk to you.

Cathryn: I don't want to talk to you. I've been doing good ignoring you. Now, bye. (I try to shut the door again, but justin leans his hand against the door to stop me)

Justin: You can't ignore me forever Cathryn!

Cathryn: I have been for the past 2 years. After you blackmailed me, I made a promise to myself that I was done with you, and would never have anything to do with you ever again.

Justin: Look. Now we can do this the easy way or the hard way.

[back at the pool...]

Zacarie finally showed up at the back door. Jeremy got out of the pool, dryed himself off with his towel, and wrapped it around his waste. He unlocked the back door and let Zacarie in. (Zacarie came in wearing light blue skinnyjeans, a black sirt with the Batman logo on it, and black red laced converse).

Jeremy: Hey Zac, long time no see.

Zacarie: Yeah, tell me about it. It's been like since the last day of school since I've seen yall. Where's Cathryn?

Jeremy: Probably still up stairs, searching for you at the front door. Din dong ditch?

Zacarie: Haha, what? I just parked out in the back beside your fence, and jumped over. I think I did see someone else at the door.

Jeremy:Oh ok.

Cathryn: (still at the front door with justin, I yell for help) JEREMY, JAMES, HELP!!!

Jeremy: (heres me yell for help) Shit. Zac can you go upstairs with me to make sure Cat's okay? I'm going to need you to grabb at least my shorts that are laying on the couch.

Zacarie: Okay.

James get out of the pool,wrapps a towel around his waste, and goes upstairs with Zacarie and Jeremy. There now upstairs, Jeremy pokes his head out from behinde a wall, and sees me trying to keep Justin from coming in.

Jeremy: (whispers) Shit. It's Justin. Zacarie, quickly go get mine and James's shorts. Don't let Justin see you.

Zacarie: Okay. (He quickly and quietly walks over to the couch. He picks up Jeremy's and James' shorts, and tosses them to Jeremy. James and Jeremy quickly put their shorts on.)

[back to me and Justin...]

Cathryn: Justin get off my property and leave me alone!

Justin: No! Like I said before I need to talk to you. That's it, I tried being nice. Looks like we're going to have to do this the hard way.(Justin grabbs my wrist, and pulls it off the door. He opens the door to let himself in)

Cathryn: (I'm trying to pull away from Justin) No! Justin, please let me go!

Justin: No. (grabbs both of my wrists, and lifts me off the ground to where my face meets his) Just let me talk to you. PLEASE!

Cathryn: (I start crying scared. I feel just crushing my bone more in my left wrist, and it's really hurting) OW. Justin, please let go. Your crushing my wrist.

Justin: We're going to you room to talk. Now lets go. (He puts me over his shoulder and starts to take me to my room.

Cathryn: JAMES!!! JEREMY!!! HELP!!!!!!

Jeremy: (walks in the living room) You better fucking put her down! NOW! And get the fucking hell out of my house!!!

Justin: (he puts me down, but still holding on tomy left wrist) Jeremy, just please let me talk to her.

Cathryn: (I see Zacarie and James behinde Jeremy) Please help me! (Justin takes his other hand and covers my mouth)Mmmmph!!!

James: Let her go!!!

Jeremy: Justin, if you don't let my sister go and leave my house. I will call the cops.

Justin: (talking to me) Stupid bitch. (pushes me towards Jeremy. I almost fall, but James and Zacarie catches me) Fine, you win. You can't ignore me forever Cathryn! Make sure to check your text messages. (Justin left, and shut the door behinde him)

James: (holding me in his arms, im still crying) It's okay Cat. He's gone now. I promise he won't ever hurt you again.

Jeremy: You okay sis?

Cathryn: No, he hurt me. He made my wrist worse, I think he broke it. It really hurts. I wish I never met him.

Jeremy: Come on. Lets go back out to the pool, and let Bradon take a look at you wrist.

Cathryn: Okay. Can I have an ice pack for my wrist?

Jeremy: Yeah, I'll go get it. You guys can go ahead and go back out to the pool, I'll be right behinde ya.

James: Okay. (picks me up, carrying me like a baby)

Cathryn: James it's my wrist thats broken, not my foot. I can still walk.

James: (kisses my lips) Oh just hush, and let me carry my baby.

Cathryn: (laughing at James' coment) Okay, daddy.

Zacarie, James and I are now back at the pool. James lays me down on one of the recliner chairs by the pool. Jeremy is also now back at the pool, and hands me the ice pack. The others were still in the pool playing chicken fight.

Trey: Hey Zacarie, want to join us?

Zacarie: Yeah, sure. (he takes his clothes off, and jumps in the pool)

Jeremy: Hey, Bradon, we need a doctor.

Bradon: K, I'm coming. (Bradon throws Kaiden off his shoulders under water, and hops out of the pool)

Kaiden: (swims back up to the surface, choking on water) Dude?!? Couldn't let me down gently?

Bradon: Sorry. (talking to Jeremy) Whats up.

Jeremy: Clutzilla over here rejured her wrist.

Cathryn: Oh, shut up Jeremy. You know that's not how it happened.

Jeremy: Sorry, it was just a joke.

Bradon: (sits down next to me) Let me see it. (I remove the ice pack, he unwraps my bandage, and the skin on my wrist is bright red,with a bit of blue purple and black in it) Yeah, it's definetly broken now. Sweety what happened? Never through out my 3 years of being a doctor, have I seen anything like this.

Cathryn: It was my ex-boyfriend. He was here. And he grabbed my wrist. I don't really wont to talk about it any more.

Bradon: Okay, just stay here and relax. And keep the ice pack on it for about 20 (looks a my wrist again) maybe 30 minutes. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

Bradon wrapps my bandage back up, and jumps back in the pool. Jeremy and James take their shorts back off, and jump back in the pool as well.

Really good. I look forward to reading more.

Great story
 

Great story keep writing. Please:)

this is really good! What do the texts say? Can't wait to find out :)

Ps. Would you possibly be able to pm me when the next part is uploaded? :)

Please post again I have been waiting and I dont think I can take any longer!

Please please please post again
 

I love your story so much!! and its been like more than a month but i really really want you to post again, please!!

Chapter 13
 

The boys start the game of volley ball. The rule was that which ever team scores 10 points first wins the game. Since Jeremy's team won the last game they served first. Considering that Zacarie is the best volleyball player on our school's team, I was glad to have him on our team for this game.
During the first half of the game, Zacarie helped lead up from 5 to 3. I was very glad that I didn't have to play, considering I hate volleyball,and I'm terrible at it. Tired of laying in the recliner, I get up to sit on the edge of the pool, & stick my feet in.
Jeremy's team supprisingly caught up 7 to 6. As time was going by we ended up with a tie at the final round 9 to 9. Zacarie spiked the ball over the net, but Kaiden luckly digs(blocks) the spike, hitting it back over to our net. James tries to hit it back over the net, but the net blocks it causing our team to loose. Jeremy and the rest of his team mates cheer in victory. The guys comes towards the edg of the pool,near to were I'm sitting.
Jeremy: Since our team won, you guys and gal gets to wash us.

James: Guys, I'm really sorry. I thought I had it.

Cathryn: It's okay James. It's not your fault. From what I saw they got really lucky.

Kaiden: Since Zacarie just got here, it's his turn to pick a dare.

Zacarie: Okay. I dare Cathryn to be my little child for the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Uh, Okay.

Zacarie: The rules are that I will pick your clothes, and you will do as I say. And you’re to call me daddy for the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Daddy? Really?

Zacarie: Yup. Oh and if you mess up and forget, there will be punishment.

Cathryn: Weird, but okay.

Jeremy: Okay. Let’s go upstairs to my bathroom so that the losers can wash us winners.

Cathryn: More like wieners.

Jeremy: Haha, very funny. You know just for that sarcasm you get to wash me and Logan,

Logan: Can’t wait to see Cat all wet and sexy.

Cathryn: Ewww. I’m sorry?

Jeremy: Too late. Now come on, let’s go.

We are all now upstairs in Jeremy’s bathroom. Jeremy’s shower is pretty big. It’s big enough to fit 6 people inside. It’s a64.1 inches X 64.1 inches rainforest 78 whirlpool steam shower with a iPod/MP3 player inside, also with a compatible steam shower with 16 jet whirlpool tub.
Me, Logan, Jeremy, Kaiden, and James went into Jeremy’s shower. While Jordan, Bradon, Zacarie, and Trey went to my shower.
Jeremy got the water started, and we all stepped into his shower. The water was set to warm temperature, and felt really good against my skin. Jeremy sets out men’s Suave body wash, and men’s Suave shampoo and conditioner.

Jeremy: (hands James the body wash) Besides using a wash rag you two have to use your hands.

Cathryn: Ewww. My night just keeps on getting worse.(before I start to squirt some of the body wash onto my hands, Logan takes it away from me.)

Logan: Wait., before you start. I want you to clean my cock off with your mouth.

Cathryn: EWWW NO! I’d rather kiss a monkey's hairy ass, then put that disgusting shitty piece of string in my mouth.

James: (can’t help but laugh, after what he just heard me say) Wow, that was like 3 burns in one sentence.

Kaiden: A tri burn. Nice.

Jeremy: Cathryn, you better watch your mouth, or I’ll clean it out with soap. Logan, you better not even thing about putting that thing any where in my sister.

Logan: Fine, whatever.

Right before we were about to start Zacarie and Trey walks in.

Trey: Hey Jeremy got any extra shampoo and body wash that doesn't smell so girly. No offense Cat.

Cathryn: (laughing at their reaction) It's okay.

Jeremy: Yeah, Go look in the closet next to my sink. It should be on the second shelf.

Trey: k.

Zacarie: Cathryn after you're done you need to meet me in your bathroom, so I can give you your shower..

Cathryn: (almost forgot that I have to pretend to be his daughter tonight) Okay daddy.

Zacarie: Good girl.

Cathryn: (mumbling) That's gonna be annoying.

Zacarie: What was that?

Cathryn: Oh, nothing.

Zacarie: K.

Trey finally found the shampoo and body wash and they leave Jeremy's bathroom.

I take the body wash from Logan and squirt some on my right hand. Not knowing who I'll be comfortable washing first, Logan grabs my right wrist and forces me to start washing him. I look over at James and hes already washing Kaiden's body.
Logan still not letting go of my wrist, is making me move down to wash his lower area. Knowing what was coming I try to back away from him,but he keeps pulling me closer. Because I was trying to struggle away from him, I slipped but luckly Jeremy caught me before I could fall.

Jeremy: Cathryn, stop trying to get yourself out of this. The faster you clean Logan, the
faster it will be over with. And yes, you have to wash every inch of our body's. Understood?

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: (fed up my attitude, and spanks me) I asked you a question. Do you understand this?

Cathryn: Yes.

Jeremy: Good. Now hurry up.

I'm hurry up with cleaning Logan. Jeremy was right, the faster I go the faster it will be done. James was already done cleaning Kaiden,and decided to help me out by washing Logan's hair so I could get started on cleaning Jeremy. Jeremy squirted some more body wash in my right hand. I started washing his shoulder, then moving down to his arms. I then moved to his chest, then washing his legs, and his feet. Before I started to wash Jeremy's cock, Kaiden grabs my wrist to stop me.

Kaiden: Wait. Since it's my turn to give a dare. I dare Jeremy to let me finish cleaning him off.

Jeremy: Okay.

James and Logan has already finish cleaning themselves off, and leaves the bathroom.I start to get up to follow them, but Jeremy stops me before I could leave.

Jeremy: Whoa, wait. Where do you think you're going?

Cathryn: I thought I was done. So I was going to wait for Zacarie.

Jeremy: Oh,not yet. You still haven't washed my back, or my hair. So you're not finished yet.

I already see that Kaiden has started cleaning Jeremy's cock by sucking it. Trying to ignore what there doing, I finish washing Jeremy's back. I squirt some shampoo in my right hand and start washing his hair. Because Jeremy is taller than me, it was hard for me to reach his head so I had to stand on my tiptoes.
Jeremy: (I accidentally get shampoo in his eyes) AAAAHHHH SHIT! CAT!!!

Cathryn: I'm really sorry. I didn't mean too.

Jeremy: That's it! I had enough of you. Just leave. NOW!

Cathryn: Okay. I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: (starts to calm down some) It's okay. Just go.

With out another word, I grab a towel to wrap around myself, and go to my bathroom.

As I walk in my bathroom, I see Zacarie waiting for me. Everyone else is in the living room.

Zacarie: There's my little girl. Now take your towel off and step into your shower.

Cathryn: Zac, I really don't feel comfortable doing this.

Zacarie: (pats my butt) That was a warning. From now on you are to ONLY call my daddy.
Mess up again, you'll get more spankings than that. Understood?

Cathryn: Yes daddy.

Zacarie: Good girl. Now. Take off your towel and step in the shower. Don't want the water to get cold.

Zacarie set the water temperature to warm,and I stepped into the shower. He steps in with me. Zacarie gets a wash rag and my squirts my favorite kind of body wash onto it (Ocean Breeze by Suave).

Zacarie: Close your eyes. I don't want to get soap in them.
I close my eyes, and Zacarie starts to wash my face. He's done washing my face, grabs my
shower head and rinses my face off so I could see. I open my eyes, and he starts washing my shoulders, an then down to my arms. It started to feel kind of a bit weird when he started washing my breast. Next he moved down toward my stomach, my legs and then my feet. He then washed my back. It also felt a bit weird when he had to wash my vagina and my butt. He was finally done washing my, took my shower head and rinsed off the soap. After he was done washing my body, he grabbed my Lavender Suave shampoo, washed my hair, rinsed off the shampoo, and did the same with the conditioner. After he was finally done washing my hair, he rinsed me all off, turned off my shower, grabbed a towel, and started drying me off. We both stepped out of my shower, and wrapped a clean towel around me. Before we could leave, he dried and brushed my hair.

Zacarie: There. Now my little girl is squeaky clean. Lets go to the living room where wveryone else is.

Cathryn: Okay.

We leave my bathroom and walk into the living room. I see James sitting on the couch, and go sit next to him.

Jeremy: Since Kaiden already took his turn while we were in the shower it's my turn. I dare Cathryn to let us all play with her little pussy.

Cathryn: (I'm in shock at what Jeremy just dared me to do) NO. I'm NOT doing that.

Jeremy: Then you'll be punished an be my slave.

Cathryn: Jeremy, Please?!? That's not fair.

Jeremy: Sorry, but it's the rule for this game.

James: Jeremy, come on. That's not fair. She's your sister, don't make her do that.

Jeremy: James unless you want to be my slave too, I suggest you shut up. Cathryn, I'm giving you one more chance. Either you do my dare I picked out for you, or you'll be punished and become my slave.

Cathryn: I don't want to play this game anymore.

Jeremy: Fine then. You're now my slave.

Hey readers.
I'm really sorry about the late post. Right after I graduated high school, I've been really busy with searching for the right college, & jobs. Like I said before, I promise that I will NEVER leave this story until it is finished.
I just posted a new chapter for you guys, and hope that you like it :)

Good stuff, keep it coming.

Awesome Chapter Kittcat I cant wait to see if she really does become his slave or not or finish the game.

okay wow the best story ever

I just found this today. I'm on page 4 and trying to catch up. It's great so far.

Chapter 13 pt.2
 

Cathryn: No. I said that I wasn’t playing anymore. So I’m not your slave.

Jeremy: If you remember the rules, you’re still my slave and you’ll still be punished even if you back out of the game. So yes, you are my slave. And as punishment, you have to suck our cocks. Now go lay in the middle of the floor.

Cathryn: Ewww, NO. I’m not doing that.

Jeremy: (pulls my hair dragging me to the middle of the floor) Listen to me. I’am sick and tired of you always complaining, and not doing as I tell you to do. I’am your big brother, and it’s about time you start learning how to respect me. So from now on you have to do everything I tell you to do whether you like it or not. Is that understood?

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: (spanks me really hard) I asked you a question. Is that understood?

Cathryn: (the way Jeremy was treating me was making me scared of him. I’ve never seen him this angry at me before)Yes.

Jeremy: Good. (pushes me down to make me lay on the floor) Now since James is your boyfriend, I’ll be kind enough to let him go first.

Cathryn: But I really don’t feel comfortable doing that in front of everyone.

Jeremy: I really don’t care. Now I suggest you do your punishment now, before it gets any worse.

James: (comes over to me. He grabs my right hand to help me up off the floor) Come on Cat. Lets go to your room.

Jeremy: (grabs my hair pulling me back towards him) Where do you think you’re taking her? She still hasn’t received her punishment.

James: Jeremy it’s almost 4am. She needs to get her sleep. Now let her go.

Kaiden: Jeremy, James is right. We’re all tired. So lets go to bed and finish this tomorrow.

Jeremy: Fine. (talking to me) We’ll start your punishment first thing tomorrow. (lets go of my hair)

Cathryn: Okay.

Trey: Where can we sleep?

Jeremy: You guys are welcome to sleep upstairs in the two guest bedrooms, or down here in the living room.

We all put our clothes back on, and then said our good nights to each other. Trey and Zacarie took the guest room next to our library. Logan and Jordan took the guest room next to our recording studio. Bradon stayed in the living room sleeping on the couch, and of course Kaiden slept with Jeremy in his room.
James and I are finally in my room, laying in my bed. James puts his arms around me and starts kissing me. Knowing what might happen tomorrow, I decided that tonight should be our first night to make love.

Cathryn: James?

James: (still kissing me( Mmmhmmm?

Cathryn: I think I’m ready.

James: (stops kissing me) Really?

Cathryn: Yeah. I love you James.

James: I love you too Cathryn.

With that James and I started passionately kissing each other. We both take our shirts off, He slides off my shorts, and underwear. He then starts rubbing my clit and fingering my vagina. I never felt this feeling before, but it felt really good. Right when I was about to cum, he stops.

James: Can you suck me?

Cathryn: Yeah. I guess.

James takes his pants off. I crawl down, and stand on my knees in between his legs. I start kissing and licking his cock. He then gently grabs my hair, puts it all the way back in my throat, and guides me, pulling me back and fourth. After a couple of minutes, he pulls my head back to stop me.

James: Are you ready?

Cathryn: Yes, I’m ready.

I lay back down on my back,. James puts a towel under me, and then gets on top of me. Taking my breath away he slowly puts his cock inside my vagina. I start to feel this strange burning pain inside of me as he goes in me deeper.

James: (knowing I hate the sight of blood, he whispers into my ear) Close your eyes, and relax.

Cathryn: (trying to keep myself from screaming in pain) Okay.

James finally pops me open. I can’t help but to cry a bit because of the pain.

James: (Whispers in my ear to help me clam down) It’s okay baby. It’s okay. I’m sorry it hurts. I promise that I’ll make it feel better. I love you.

Cathryn: I love you too.

James gently starts moving slowly back and fourth inside me. The pain finally went away, and it started to feel really good. I never felt this feeling before. It’s like my vagina was begging for more and more. Minutes have gone by and I have finally came, just a couple of seconds after me, James fills me up inside with his cum. I lay on my side, and James lays down next to me, putting his arms around me.

James: Did you like that?

Cathryn: Yeah. It felt good. (I kiss him on the lips) I love you.

James: (kisses me back) I love you too.

Cathryn: (I close my eyes) Good night.

With in two seconds I fall right to sleep.

James: (Whispers into my ear) Sweet dreams baby. ( kisses my forehead, closes his eyes, and goes to sleep.

all in all a good story
this is jsut my opinion so don't rage mf if you disagree and if you agree kool

ok i love your story much like i love others, and much like others there is 1 thing that has now almost turned me off it.
for me it's when characters sudenly change from the way they are seen earlier on jeremy in this case. again my opinion but for the better part of the story he is umm how to put it..... he does not like people making sexual "moves" on his sister (for the most part) and often treated people who tried to (if memory serves). but in the last two segments he pulled a complete 180 and told his sister to let them play with her pussy? and after she said no she told her to suck all there cocks? (and if i remember right he said something to logan about that in the 2nd last upload "Jeremy: Cathryn, you better watch your mouth, or I’ll clean it out with soap. Logan, you better not even thing about putting that thing any where in my sister.") just saying so please don't rage me

sorry for the rant but it is late and i had to say it

all in all 7/10 (if not for feeling like i stated before 8.5/10)

P.S the last upload ending was nice tho so maybe 7.25/10

(also sorry for the few spelling mistakes again late and very tierd)

This story is AWESOME. Although...i'm kind of confused on weather its real or fiction....PLEASE TELL ME OR IT WILL BOTHER ME FOR A WHILE. And if it is real, you have real courage :O

Another great installment.:)

Can't wait for more!!!!!!:)
 

MORE MORE
I am really enjoying this
it's ok that you've made some mistakes in some chapters
this story is great
Is it real or fiction?

wow they had sex um wow i love this wow i just love it like wow(i like the word wow)

amazing
 

this is amazing please keep writing and when this is over you should make more stories

Been a while
 

It's been a while since you posted anything....we're all getting anxious.

LoveLoveLOVEEE.
 

Bahh I love this story! I just found it today and already can't wait for the next installment! (:

I agree. I was happy to see the next installment so quickly!

:)
 

OMG JUST FOUND THIS STORY! most stories on here lose my interest pretty quickly. this is awesome!!!:p

*Does his best Oliver impersonation*

Please, can we have some more ?