If you hope to find someone worth while from your add, you'll need to work on it more:

Refer to:

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=25934
and
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=22916

For basic info on making a decent add.

And look here for examples of good advertisements:

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=69251