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The Urge

Posted 03-19-2019 at 11:00 AM by Butterfly
Updated 03-19-2019 at 11:10 AM by Butterfly

Heart. Beats. Fast
Breathing hard
Tension wild
Heavy as lard

Thoughts swirl round
Fog settles in
Feeling no more
Urge to sin

Fight the urge
Dont cause pain
Want so bad
Keeps me sane

I feel numb
Want to feel
It wont help
Need to heal

Overwhelmed
Way too much
All I need
Painful touch

Strength fill me
Fight the urge
Cant do it
On the verge

Overcome
I will rise
Do not cut
Butterflies

War rage on
Battle won
Here I am
Never done

Tension gone
Feathery down
Breathing calms
Heart. slows. down
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  1. Old Comment
    LitDarkness's Avatar
    This is a beautiful poem and glad you won the battle.
    Posted 03-15-2019 at 12:10 PM by LitDarkness LitDarkness is offline
  2. Old Comment
    Butterfly's Avatar
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by LitDarkness View Comment
    This is a beautiful poem and glad you won the battle.
    Thank you. I am glad as well.
    Posted 03-15-2019 at 01:24 PM by Butterfly Butterfly is offline
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    Consensus's Avatar
    I'm no poet, but that is a good verse, clever beat and clever reflection with some lovely internal rhyme. Technically, it is great as well!

    I like the use of punctuation, personally, very e e cummings.
    Posted 03-19-2019 at 11:13 AM by Consensus Consensus is offline
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    Butterfly's Avatar
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Consensus View Comment
    I'm no poet, but that is a good verse, clever beat and clever reflection with some lovely internal rhyme. Technically, it is great as well!

    I like the use of punctuation, personally, very e e cummings.
    Thank you. It was a 3 am writing so I didn't really know how well it was going to turn out and I didn't take any time to edit it.
    Posted 03-19-2019 at 11:19 AM by Butterfly Butterfly is offline
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    SecondChance's Avatar
    This is very good! You can win every battle with amazing verses like this
    Posted 03-20-2019 at 11:00 PM by SecondChance SecondChance is offline
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    IceMaiden's Avatar
    I am so happy and proud of you for not giving in!!
    Posted 03-24-2019 at 07:57 AM by IceMaiden IceMaiden is offline
    Updated 03-24-2019 at 09:10 AM by Butterfly
 

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