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RocksOff
02-18-2008, 05:58 AM
My first, first person story. Always wanted to do one and now I have the chance.. well actually, I've been too lazy to write. Anyway, to save myself from boredom activitys such as becoming overweight and playing with elastic bands, Here's a heart warming tale of.. I'll let you know when I write it ANYWAY! WE BEGIN, CONCERNTRAIT!

Hi, my name is Ronny. I live in a country town in Australia. I'd tell you the name but I'd like to stay unknown. I like to swim, listen to music and help my brother out on the farm. Bloody tiring work I tell ya'. I'm 17 and I've always been a quiet, well mannered kid who kept to himself about stuff, you know, the kind that no one even considers talking to and whatnot. Yea', you guessed it. I was the kid at school who got the short end of the stick. Tell ya' what, I'd love to beat the shit out of a few of those kids now' days. Well, you're probably sick of my jabbering, I just like to get to know folks before I go telling em' secrets like this. Now, despite all the 'Mysterious, weird guy' crap. I have an active internet life and my personality on the net' is the exact opposite to my real life. Kinda' like the Jackle and Hyde thing, you know? Split Perso.. yea', that crap. I have loads of friends on Myspace and I even have girls asking if I'm single. What's the fucking point though? I'm not getting a shela who lives 300 bloody K's away, stuff that. I'll just masturbate, it works for me. Now, on the subject of sex, bet you dirty basterds would get a kick out of this and hey! This is strictly campfire circle gossip ok? If you tell anyone, I'll chop off your balls and feed them to my dog, ok? Now it all started when I was in 10th Grade. There was this girl. Marissa her name was. Now, she was soo god damn hot! I mean, long, tanned legs, blonde hair, pouty lips, beautiful face. The list goes on but anyway. I think she kinda' knew that I was sniffing around like a dog behind her and she used to love teasing me. If she saw me in class looking at her, she'd lift a leg up and reveal a bit more of that sexy thigh but never, ever would she talk to me. I'd say hi and she'd laugh and walk off. It sucked ass! There I was waiting for her to one day run up and say "Let's fuck!" but she never did.. I don't think she would of if it wasn't for this site aye'. Getdare or some shit like that. I dunno' but anyway! I came home from school and jumped on the net to see all my invisible, cyber mates. I was going through all the Myspace bullshit when I had the urge to have a wank. So I jump on google and I search "Amputee porn". Found nothing but when I searched "Sexual dares" I found this site. I clicked it and up came these forums. I signed up and away I went. Posting dares for people and making threads for people to dare me. After about a week on the site, I did a little more exploring and found a forum for slaves seeking masters. Now, I've always liked a little bit of S&M action so I decided to post a thread and see what I got. "16/M/Australia seeks M/F master to treat me badly". No replys for about a week untill one day, I decided to have a see and look if anyone had replied. One reply. "Hi, where in Australia? 17/F/Aus'". "I'm in Alice Springs, you?". "Me too!". From there it blossomed into something else. "Yea, I'm looking for a master who is into some really kinky stuff". "I think I'm your master then!". After a bitmore chatting and some details, that night we organised a meet. At Welsh Park at 11pm. I got up off the computer and ran upstairs and got some decent clothes on and a pack of Smiths chips (I was hungry!). At 10pm, I left my house to embark on the 2 Km' to Walsh Park. While I was crapping my pants about the thought that it might be a 34 year old man with a hearing aid and a freckle on his nose, I was also soo fucking excited that I was finally going to have my fantasies for-filled. So, after a killer walk, I arrive at 10:46pm. I walk over to one of the benches and collapse on it. I was dead out of breath. I just sat there for 10 minutes playing with my shirt buttons wondering when the fuck she was going to get here and in that instance, a car pulled up into the car park. My eyes opened and strained to see past the lights. I saw two figures get out and in that moment, I felt a hard object clobber my head. It knocked me out no doubt. I dreamt of being on an ocean, being able to walk on the water. I walked for about 2 hours when it all went black. I realised I was awake but what woke me up made my penis curl up and start crying. It was..

To Be Continued.

RocksOff
02-18-2008, 06:44 AM
It was... Marissa. Standing there with 2 girls. Big butch girls with a couple of huge ass dildo's! I nearly shit myself! I tried to yell "DSFGSDSGDSF" (Crazy talk, I use it in panic) but my fucking mouth was tied closed with a tea towel. I tried to get up and explain my crazy talk in motion (Like shiraids) but I was bound to a lounge. Whilst I was thinking of a way to show my panic in ways other than voice or movement. Marissa piped up and said "Hi Ronny, didn't think it was you". I looked up and said "FGDFGDFGDFGDF". Once again, the tea towel stopped me from sounding like an idiot on caffine tablets. She just looked at me and giggled and said "Listen, I was the girl who replied to you on Getdare".
"I'll be your master soon enough but I have a little pain for you to go through first". She glanced at one of the girls then the other and then said "You have to go through them.. or should I say, they have to go through you". After about a minute or two of serious thinking, I realised that.. They were going to.. Touch my anus with those.. they didn't look like dildos! If you ever saw the size of a foot long at subway, imagine that but as thick as an arm!
When she left the room and they began to strip and disscuss how they were going to rape me of my anal innocence, I thought about yelling more but it had finally sunken in that I couldn't. I just layed there and listened to them talking. "I wanna' do it first" "No I want to". They sounded like 2 children fighting over an elastic band they found in the grass. Now, we all know the joy of elastic bands, anyway. They'd finished bitching and now, they were ready for a sexathon. Now, the feeling of a foot long rubber dong being violently shoved into you doesn't feel like heaven. After they had finished with me and made my asshole as loose as an Arbanian hooker, they tied me back up to the lounge and joined Marissa in the Kitchen. I began to fall asleep. It was 4 in the morning and I felt like crap and I was on a hot bitches lounge so, eh. All positives. I dozed off and what I awoke to was even worse than what had happened just before.


TBC. (P.S. Removed the gay bits so I would get people throw bibles at me.)

RocksOff
02-18-2008, 06:51 AM
What do you guys reckon'? Keeper?

thedareman
02-18-2008, 07:03 AM
keep going its great

Pikachu
02-19-2008, 05:37 AM
It is very good but i am aussie and i am telling you we don't act that stereotype

keep it up though

RocksOff
02-19-2008, 07:13 AM
Well, I'm also and Aussie but a Westerner and let me tell you, where I come from. Every oppertunity you get to say the word 'fuck' is an oppertunity you take. Although, I don't think guys talking about getting sexually molested by a dildo at campfires, that's just one of those "If I could have the world the way I wanted" things. Anyway.

I awoke to Melissa, with a pretty big whip. Not just a whip, had like razor blades on the tips so let's call it a 'If you don't do what I want, I'll slice your balls off 12 times before the hit the ground' whips. I tried to scream "DSGDFGDFGDFGD" and remembered I was gagged (I like the whole "GAFDGZDGH" thing so get used to hearing it). She opened her sexy mouth and said "I have a few things for you to do and if you refuse, you'll very quickly learn what it feels like to have your ass cut into ham". The thought made me quite hungry but the pain isn't really worth it. I just nodded my head. She leant over and untied me and said "Make any kind of attempt to escape and I'll whip your white ass". Finally being able to speak, I said "Have you got any panadol, I have a killer headache". *BOOM* Say goodbye to my senses. She slapped me so hard, I saw god for about 5 seconds. I rubbed my cheek and said "Ok, no panadol". "Follow me" she said and waltz'd off into the hallway. I followed like an idiot into what I like to call 'Marissa's room of torture'. This thing had chains everywhere, a fuck machine and some pain inflicting device that looked like Satan himself made it. While I stood in amazement, she grabbed a few chains off the wall rack and said "On the bed bitch boy". Most people would have been scared out of their wits but me? I was having the time of my life. I climbed onto the bed and she cuffed me to the 4 bed posts. She blindfolded me and after that, bye bye visual. I head a noise like something rolling say a projector on a stand. Before I knew it, there was a dildo on a metal rod abusing my ass at top speed. Felt like a woodpecker attacking my anews (Had to throw in a Borat word somewhere). She chucked a couple of nipple zappers on me and said "This is your hell for 2 hours". "Every 10 minutes the machine will increase in speed". "Have fun". Me hell she said? More like. My heaven.

TBC.

RocksOff
02-20-2008, 06:38 AM
After the 2 hours of "Hell". She walked back in and turned off the ass attacker. I thought I heard her mumble something along the lines of "Wow, he took this well" but the look of pure exauhstion on my face proved that I indeed, didn't take it well at all. It felt like someone had shoved a bowling ball inside me and it.. didn't feel great. I heard her walk over and then off came the blindfold. my eyes darted around the room to try and figure out how and when I was going to be let go. "I've called your parents and told them that you had to leave urgently, for a friend of yours had been in a cer accident". "I told them that you're staying the night here". I piped up and said "Wait, how did you get my phone number?". "I've been intrested in you for awhile now, I looked your number up in the phone book about 2 months ago, just so I had a plan for the night this was going to happen". "How do you know it was going to happen?". "I'm a pretty girl, I get everything I want". I just did the 'fair enough' face and left it at that. She un-cuffed me and led me to a cage in her laundry. "Here's your bed, get your rest". "Some of the stuff you're doing for me tomorrow is very, very dirty and disguisting and I'm sure, you'll love it Bitch". I just said "Whatever" and crawled into my cage wondering what kinda' sick crap she was going to do to me and when the hell was she going to let me go. She locked the cage, turned off the light and went to bed I presumed. I layed out and closed my eyes and fell asleep. God knows how after all the stuff that's happened so far, what's next?!

TBC.

Pikachu
02-21-2008, 05:57 AM
very dirty+very disgusting =very good:D

RocksOff
02-22-2008, 08:18 AM
I woke up, in my cage and I was dying to piss. I managed to get a peek at the clock from the laundry. 7am it read. Boy, not much sleep. Only like.. 4 hours but I did have that snooze on the lounge. I rolled back over on my blanket (I guess she's too poor for a doggy bed) and looked up at my metal ceiling, thinking about how I was going to get out of this. I mean, I like it and all but.. it's a tad' too controlling for me. Plus, She said really dirty stuff, I'm not eating poo. I might if someone gave me a million dollars to do it but that's out of the question here. And hour had past while I was reflecting on last night and suddenly, I heard footsteps so I quickly pretended to be asleep. Bad idea. I got a kick up the ass (Litterally). "No sleeping in bitch boy, we have work to do". What does she mean by work? "Gotta' go to the toilet?". I nodded my head in rage as it felt like if I didn't piss soon, my dick would strangle me. "Ok, piss in this". She handed me a jug. I knew something was up but, I could have pissed my pants I had to go that bad so, I pissed in it. "Good boy, we'll need that for later". I shivered at what she said. "Later?". "You'll see now get out of the cage and follow me". I crawled out and followed her into.. the backyard? "Ok, I want all the leaves raked up and I was the gardening done and! Clean out the shed would you?". "By the way, I'll be keeping an eye on you the whole time so, no trying to escape or you'll have a boot stuck in your ass". "Bitch" I mumbled and grabbed the rake. I hate housework so much! Wasn't this supposed to be sexual? I raked up the leaves and I did the gardening. Now all that was left was the shed. I walked in and looked around. Pretty big and I'm pretty tired, she can't see me in here. I'll catch up on those hours I missed. I layed down on some old pillows in there and caught some shuteye untill.. she walked in and whipped me with the tortue whip. "Get up and get inside! NOW!" Ohh shit.. While walking inside, she said "If you would have finished your jobs, I wouldn't be doing what I'm about to do to you". Suddenly, I remembed that piss that I gave her. Ohh shit. We walked into the lounge room and without a doubt, there it was but there wasn't only mine, there was another jug, which had more in it.. I stood there puzzled, too puzzled to see her grab the handcuffs.. "Get on the lounge". She was holding the whip so, I did it. She chained me to the lounge and walked over to the fuller jug of piss. She pulled down her miniskirt and panties. I saw it all, her shaved pussy, her tight ass, her amazing legs. I cracked a massive hard on. Untill she started pissing in the jug.. She finished up and filled in completely. I was very scared.. "Ok, today, you're getting a urine enema :)". After some research on the net about medical examinations, I knew what an enema was and a nomral one sounded scary, not to mention.. a piss enema? "Now, because you did 2 out of the 3 things that I aksed, you get to choose who's piss goes inside you. Mine or yours". Before I could even answer she grabbed a tube and a funnel. She positioned my ass facing upright then she got started. She stuck the tube into my bottom and then put the funnel into the otherside of the tube and then.. she started pouring her urine into the funnel. It actually feels great to have warm piss filling your rectum untill you have about 3 liters of it in you.. After she finished with her jug, she got mine and poured that in too! By the end of it, I had 4 liters of piss in me. It felt like I had to shit a mueseum. She took the funnel out and quickly and swiftly removed the tube. She didn't spill a drop. "You're staying like that for an hour". "If any is expeled, I'll just put more and more in". At that moment, she left the house, leaving me, filled with piss, feeling so dirty and disguisting. It felt great.

Tbc.

Pikachu
02-23-2008, 12:11 AM
Its too good lease continue

RocksOff
02-24-2008, 09:34 AM
She returned after the hour and I'd managed to hold most of it in. I'd expeled about.. well not alot. She looked at the stains on the lounge and said "You couldn't hold it, could you?" "Not really, no". "Look, cause you've been through quite alot of stuff in the last 42 hours, I won't punish you". She unchained me and said "I'm sorry for hitting you that night when we had the meetup, if I'd known it was you, I'd have acted differently". "Go to the toilet, I want to talk more and I can tell you're uncomftable". I got up and went to her toilet and got all this crap out of me then returned, un.. urinised (I'll never piss right again). I sat back down on the lounge and we began talking like normal people. "I've never really warmed up to a guy in my life". "Whenever I try, he just turns out to be a controling asshole, which is why I took the S&M route". "It allows me to be in control of things". "Why not find someone who you know, isn't so horrible and controling?". "Why do you think I like you?". At this moment, my heart raced. The girl of my dreams just confessed her feelings for me! Ohh my god! Marissa isn't actually a controling bitch, she just wanted someone who would treat her right! "Look, you're probably tired as hell, go get some sleep". "I'm not done with you yet if that's what you think". "D.. do you think that w" "I'm not going into it". "I'll let you know another day". I just said "Alright" and waddled off to her bedroom. Not the torture one, the normal one. Her bed was quite comfy'. I quickly feel asleep. What tomorrow brings me, god knows.


TBC.

Pikachu
02-25-2008, 12:51 AM
Its truelly brillent but more messy and disgusting :D

RocksOff
02-25-2008, 09:29 AM
I awoke to the smell of urine and poo. I immediately jumped up and tried to get out of there but I was chained to the bed! And I was in the torture room! I thought she was going to be a bit nicer from now on! I started to yell "Marissa!" At the top of my lungs and at that instant, there she was in the room. "I said I'm not done with you". "Today is going to be the most horrible day of your life". My eyes became wide with fear. I felt so uncomftable right now. I was litterally screaming untill she gagged me. I don't know why I became so scared but, it just happened. Marissa kicked me in the leg as hard as she could and shouted "STOP IT!". She grabbed the whip and whipped me on the chest. I groaned in pain and then stopped moving and trying to scream. "You're not getting out of this, so bear it". "After today, I might let you go, dpending on how well you handle today's events". "Well, you're awake now so let's get started". She unchained me and led me over to.. I'm not sure what it was. It looked like an eletric chair but there was a hole cut in the seat and a tube leading to where the mouth would be. She then attached another tube to my penis and placed a bucket on a hook about a meter above me, the hook being attached to this evil looking machine. She locked me in and explained it all to me. "Ok, this is my own personal torture device I came up with". "There will be my pee coming down that tube into your mouth". "You must drink it and fill the bucket that is attached to your penis, via the tube". One the bucket is full, it will weigh down and release you from the chair". "You only have have 15 minutes to do this though". "If you do take longer than 15 minutes, the bucket above you will be dropped onto you and.. it contains my poo". "Lots too". "Good luck". She turned on the machine and walked out. I felt the foul tasting liquid fill my mouth and I began drinking it. I didn't want shit all over me. I didn't even have time to breath as, as soon as I swallowed, my mouth was full of piss again. After a while, I felt the need to go. I pissed about 1 leter, filling a quater of the bucket. By now, 9 minutes had passed. I had 6 minutes and I hadn't even filled half! Swallow, swallow, swallow. I needed to go again. This time, peeing about 2 leters. The bucket was about 3 quaters full but.. at that moment. The bucket above me toppled down and her shit went ALL OVER ME! It smelt horrible and she didn't tell me but, after the bucket falls. The sex machine beneath starts up. I still needed to get free so I kept drinking all her piss down while having a heap of poo on me and a racing dildo up my ass. I pissed again and then.. I was set free. I jumped out of the chair and swallowed the last of the piss. It was weird, but I enjoyed drinking her piss. Marissa came back into the room and glaced at me. "I see you wern't fast enough". "No" I said. "Well, it's good to see, you still finished after getting shit thrown on you". "Go have a shower, I need you for one last thing and you're set free". I was finally going to be set free! I jumped in the shower and washed all this crap off me then came back out ready for my final mission. I walked into Marissa, naked on a chair, with her legs spread. "All you have to do is drink the warm piss from my pussy and then, it's over". I quickly kneeled below her and stuck my head between her legs. I wrapedmy lips around her pussy. "Really?". I motioned "Yes" with my hand and she began. The warm stream of piss filled my mouth and I instantly began swallowing. It tasted soo good fresh! Right from the tap. She pissed about 2 literes into my mouth which I swallowed willingly then I licked her pussy allover to catch any leftovers. I pulled back and sat down when she did something soo unexpected..

TBC.

RocksOff
02-25-2008, 09:40 AM
She pulled me up and kissed me. Not just a quick one either. I fel her tongue in my mouth. She began stroking my cock and I began rubbing her tits. She moaned and slid her tongue in even further. This is the day I've been waiting for. She pulled away and got up and told me to follow her. I did so and she lead me to her bedroom. She locked the door behind me and then, she pulled me onto the bed and began kissing me again. God! Thankyou! She pulled her lips away from mine and slid down to my dick. She started to suck it and lick it and then, asked for me to pee in her mouth. "What?". "JUST DO IT". I nodded my head and released a stream of piss. She deep-throated me and let it all just run down her throat. After I was done, she got ontop of me and put my face between her legs, she anted me to lick her out. Gooooodddddd!!!! I began licking her out, her shaved pussy seemed like I was eating heaven itself. She moaned and groaned and after she had come, got off me. Now is when I got what I truely wanted. She bent over and got into position and said "Here's your prize, fuck me". Before she even finished, I was inside her pumping away! Every stroke seemed like the last. IT WAS SOO GOOD! We fucked for about 20 minutes before I unleashed my seed insdie her beautiful pussy. After we just layed there, her in my arms. These last few days, had been great and now, I had the girl of my dreams, in my arms! My desire for her had been forfilled and now, I was left to reap the benefits of my slave work. Wait, do my parents know where I am?


END! Sorry if you thought it a bit rushed. I tried my best to keep it lively as I was losing intrest in the story. Hope you enjoyed. RO!

Pikachu
02-26-2008, 04:32 AM
It was a truelly great story:D

hi loser hi
05-11-2008, 09:58 AM
Great story! Nothing like a good machine sex story:D

ramsies11
05-29-2008, 12:34 PM
this was good but i wish it was longer

SpikyToad
10-03-2008, 01:31 PM
That was a good story. Your right it was a tad rushed but it was good 10/10:):):)

smilesmishy
10-04-2008, 02:29 AM
its goodt its difficult to read can u please put sum structured paragraphs in thanks if u do:confused: