A Story That Has No Title

[penguin13]

Steve was an average 16 year old who wasnt the smartest kid in school but also wasnt the dumbest. He had blonde hair, blue eyes, and was about 5 foot 9 weighing at 123 lbs.
It was a beautiful saturday in the middle of April and Steve got a text message from Kylie otherwise known as the hottest girl in the tenth grade.
K-wat r u doin
S-nm u
K-bored
S-y
K-my parents r gone for 2 weeks
S-o
K-so u want 2 come over 2night
S-k wat time
K-4

[lovethenudes]

i'm not gonna lie, thats a terrible story

[penguin13]

S-k c ya
K-bye
So he looks at the clock and it says 300. Then he runs upstairs and takes a shower. He walks out of the shower and goes into his bedroom and he puts a pair of orange and black boxers with a plain white t-shirt, a pair of jeans, and a multicolored overshirt on. Then he walks over to the clock and it says 345. So he went into the bathroom and starts to brush his teeth. After he was done he left and started to walk over to Kylies. After about 10 minutes he reached her house.

[penguin13]

thx for ur honest opion

[penguin13]

should i keep going

[glue]

its warming up try adding alot more next time

[Davros]

It seems like a good idea, but looks a little messy.

Try and add more detail and more to the posts. Otherwise, good idea :)

[shroobs]

You just need some grammar and a good person to write it, and I think it'd be good.

[darefreak101]

I agree, its ok, but use beter grammar

[bobo]

I agree, its ok, but use beter grammar

I love when this happens