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admireu4ever
02-10-2008, 03:16 PM
Let me start by saying that this story is going to be written by a few people, we ask that you please comment as much as possible and enjoy the story.

Thanks,
Tessdog
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Jake walked into the girls lockeroom, it was filled with girls getting naked. He heard them talking. As he walked towards the center of the room. He saw Madison. Jake went and felt her breast she jumped as his hands grabbed them. She was no longer scared, infact she was enjoying it. Not knowing that it was Jake working his magic on her nipples. Jake grabbed her hand and walked her into a bathroom stall. He took off her panties and began to finger her pussy. He then sat her down and he put his dick in her mouth. He went back and forth and cummed all over her..he took her clothes and ran off..leaving the stall open...all the girls were looking at Madision's Naked Body with cum all over it.

BEEP BEEP BEEP-"Good Morning, New York! This is your favorite DJ, Ricky P. and I..." Jake turned off the Alarm Clock.

It was the start of a new day, it was wonderful outside and everything was had it normally had been. Jake was 16, he did not have many friends and the ladies always neglected him. He was somewhat strong and somewhat big. Jake was a really nice guy, unlike most he was gentleman. Jake had dreamed of being risky, going to parties, and having fun with girls. But even after 16 years of life, Jake did not have a girlfriend.

As Jake took a shower, inside the shower he thought about the girls he had crushes on. He began playing with himself at the thought. His mom shouted and he turned off the shower. Jake got dressed and he put on his outfit for the day, a nice Button Shirt and a pair of Jeans. Michael went down ate some food and he got his backpack and started walking to school. He'd meet up with his two best buddies their.

As Jake began to walk he saw black cloud a few miles ahead of him. He walked towards the school, keeping an eye on this strange cloud.

Pikachu
02-11-2008, 12:38 AM
nice story has potential

tessdog i was the one who added rep unfortunetly forgot t sign it:(

keep it up its probably going to be hard for your fellow writers to keep up with you but with three writers should be written quickly and with alot of fresh ideas

zeketheorc
02-11-2008, 01:10 AM
very interesting start. I do like the start with the dream.

TeenSlave
02-11-2008, 08:54 AM
Mark was lying in bed when the alarm went off, he hated that alarm, it was the signal that he was about to be forced to start another crap day of high school. He hated his high school it was completley typical was full of idiots who just stuck together like sheep afraid to make any decisions as they might be thought of weird, but it was because of the fact they took they're anger out on him and his friends that really got him going but there was nothing they could do. Reluctantly he slid out of bed, his bare feet pressing down on the carpet, he was sitting on his bed only wearing his briefs, he yawned and stretched, the muscles rippling in his arms, he was well built he had an athletes body, broad shouldered with muscled arms and legs, narrow perfect feet making him very quick. Mark had a great chest with a six pack starting to develop. He was an intelligent lad but he had never had a girlfriend yet even though he was approaching 17, the girls in this school only went for the stupidest of the popular guys.

He stood up and brushed his hair out of his eyes, his hair came down to his neck it was mostly dark brown, but his fringe which hangs over one eye was blond. He walked into the bathroom, he stripped off his briefs revealing his cock, it was decent sized and was beginning to become hard, he decided not to relieve himself this time as he was running a bit late, he quickly showered and dressed, he was wearing a pair of dark baggy jeans, some tight white trunks he was wearing a t shirt that was covered by a black hooded jacket, he was wearing some sort of beaded chain round his neck with a wristband on one arm and a finger glove on the other, he was now walking down the street towards the school with his two best friends, curiously watching a dark cloud in the distance as it was the only cloud in the sky on this bright summers day.

Trystaan
02-11-2008, 01:54 PM
Is this the one that I am co-writing aswell??

If so I'l write one now lol

TeenSlave
02-11-2008, 03:38 PM
Yep all three of us, least I finished off my 1st story writing 3 is a bit much.

admireu4ever
02-11-2008, 08:15 PM
As the three friends walked together, a bright bolt of lighting hit down on the ground before the three boys. Each boy now had a power....one that they would begin to explore.

Kitty
02-12-2008, 02:41 AM
wht is going to be next!!!

Trystaan
02-12-2008, 02:30 PM
Matt was walking down the road on his way to school. Matt was 6,1 and had short brown hair with blonde highlights. He was good at sports and school however didn't really seem to hit it with the ladies.

He admired the sky, blue sky and a bright sun. He was puzzeled however by the only black cloud in the sky. Suddenly the cloud started swirling and his head was being cleared of all thoughts. Then the pain came. His generics were being rewritten. He suddenly felt powerful and alive.

He set off for school not knowing what was going to happen...

admireu4ever
02-12-2008, 05:30 PM
Jake fell to the ground in pain, he was screaming. "Help me...I can't...ahh!!". The pain stopped as he looked at himself he saw nothing. Everything else was still their, his friends the street..everything. But he was not. "Guys? Can you hear me?" He said.

TeenSlave
02-13-2008, 08:40 AM
Mark saw his friend disappear right before his eyes, but before he could even think about it he fell to his knees in pain, it felt like everyone in the world was shouting at him he screamed it pain, after what seemed like an age the voices started to disappear one by one, he was on all fours on the pavement breathing heavily wondering what the hell had just happened to him. Matt turned him asking what had happened, he told Matt and Matt told him that he had felt a weird powerful sensation surge through his body as well but he hadn't felt any pain. 'Guys?!, can you hear me' the sudden voice from no were made the two boys jump, they stood staring at each other puzzled until they realized that they recognized the voice, it was Jake in all the weirdness they hadn't noticed he had disappeared. 'Jake?' Mark called out nervously.

Trystaan
02-13-2008, 11:29 AM
Matt and Mark were puzzeled. They could hear Jake but couldn't see him. Then Matt had a thought,a crazy thought but a thought none the less, he thought Jake could be invisible. Sure enough in a couple of minutes Jake materialised and they thought it was some joke some kid had played on them.

Matt checked his watch 'Shit' they were late. He wished he could stop time. He started running andrealised his friends weren't following him. They were froze as if time had been stopped. He stooped he thought No Never...

admireu4ever
02-13-2008, 02:53 PM
Then, time had started again. "Guys, I swear I didn't play a joke!" He said as the boys walked into the school. Jake went his own way and went to ask Madison if she wanted to hang out. "Hey..umm, would you..umm, ermm, like to hang out tonight?" Jake finally spat it out. "Sorry Jake, I'm having a Slumber Party with Mollie and Haley tonight. Maybe some other time." She walked away. Jake was torn.

Jake went into the bathroom, he wished that he could go back to the way he was just a few minutes before. Invisble. With that thought, Jake was gone. But he was there. "Oh my god.." Jake had then stood up and ran out of the bathroom. To gym, where he was going to test out his new found powers.

IceandFire11
02-13-2008, 03:32 PM
~confused~........ :o)

TeenSlave
02-13-2008, 03:33 PM
Mark was sitting in his psychology class his mind wandering, it was the last lesson before lunch so this wasn't surprising, but it he was going through the events of the morning, what happened with all the voices in his head and Jake disappearing he wondered what it all meant, he was sure the black cloud in the sky had caused but caused what that was what he wanted to know.

TeenSlave
02-14-2008, 12:46 PM
It was now lunch time, having just been in a different lesson he was alone, he was holding onto his lunch trying to find his friends when someone stepped across him blocking his path, it was the school bully, Connor was one of the biggest guys in the school and he seemed to have the rest following him, he had short brown hair and slightly disfigured, stupid looking face he enjoyed picking on other people in the year Mark and his friends were one of his favorite target, seeing Mark on his own walking across the dining room he couldn't resist having some fun. Mark stopped dead wondering what he should do as Connor started to taunt him, Mark just stood there silently waiting for him to finish 'So what are we gonna do with him boys' Mark sighed and said' Who cares what you do, your just a sad git who likes to beat up people smaller than you, so why don't you just get lost' Connor looked dumbstruck, he stood there for a moment in silence, before turning round and walking away. Equally puzzled the rest of his gang followed him wondering what had happened. After recovering from the shock of what just happened he raced off to find Jake and Matt.

admireu4ever
02-14-2008, 02:56 PM
Jake had gone into the Girls Lockeroom, it was filled with girls from his grade. He looked around, watching the girls slowly undress. Jake then saw Madison, he made his way towards her. She was only wearing a Bra and Panties at this moment. She was so hot and Jake wanted some of her. He placed his hands on her breast. "Oh my!" she shouted, she felt it but saw nothing. People looked at her like she was crazy. Then Jake worked his way down her pussy, he began to finger her. She wanted to moan but she couldn't. Then she did. All the girls looked at her as her pink panties became wet panties.

Pikachu
02-15-2008, 02:12 AM
it is a great story keep it up

TeenSlave
02-15-2008, 09:54 AM
lol I think the three writers need to get on the same page here tessdog keeps steaming on ahead lol

admireu4ever
02-15-2008, 06:41 PM
Yea, all writers send me a PM...we need to plot.

Pikachu
02-15-2008, 11:27 PM
It is a good story but unfortunetly tessdog is jsut the better writer here no offence guys but there are very few writers on this site that can compare with here with maybe the exception of bex and usaslavegirl used to write very good stories.

You guys are very very good writers (some of the better writers on this site) but unfortunetly tessdog is out of your leage she is jsut out of most peoples leages

it is a good story thou

WorthlessPet78
02-15-2008, 11:59 PM
Yeah Very good story :D id be intrested in writing some but u guys look like u have it covered :)

Kitty
02-16-2008, 12:52 AM
love what going to happen next....

admireu4ever
02-16-2008, 09:13 PM
I'm not a girl, I really am not.

But back to the story...

Jake had to tell his best buddies. He ran out of the room to tell Mark and Matt. As he ran out of the room, he needed to go back to normal. He thought about being seen again and then he was back to normal. "Holy Crap." He said.

As Jake walked down the hall, he found Mark. "Mark, you won't beli.." Mark looked at Jake with the same stare. "You too?" He said. Both of them smiled as they thought about their new powers.

Kitty
02-17-2008, 05:25 AM
i want more story xD

Trystaan
02-17-2008, 06:11 AM
"So what can you do then Matt" Jake asked. "Alright your'e not going to believe me but I can stop time" Matt replied. Mark interupted saying " after these last few hours I can belive anything". "Well I can stop time" "Look you see Sam over there and his girlfriend"

"Yes" said the others in unison.

"Well I will have some fun with them, then I will start time again". Matt thought about the clocks stopping and sure enough everyone froze in thier positions.

Walking over to Sam Matt thought about how he could get him back for all the times he'd bullied Matt in Primary School. He knew what he was doing. First he pulled Sam's trousers and pants down and poured a couple cups of sold water of his penis. Then he took off his top and put his Girlfriends bra on him. "There that should do nicely" Matt chuckled to himself.

He walked back over to his friends and started time back up.

x_daringbaby
02-17-2008, 09:23 AM
Very fun and interesting!

admireu4ever
02-17-2008, 04:58 PM
Jake had been looking at Sam, unaware that time had been stopped he noticed that Sam's Dick was small and he was wearing a bra. Jake laughed and then thought about how he could show off his powers. He then became invisible again and walked over to Sam. Jake took Sam's belt and tied him up againt the wall. He then walked over to Mark and told him to use his powers to make Sam's GF jack him off right in the hallway. (Take it away Mark!)

thumper
02-17-2008, 05:25 PM
OMG, This is amazing!!! Your really onto something here.

TeenSlave
02-18-2008, 03:25 PM
Mark grinned at Matt and turned to focus all his attention on Sam's girlfriend, she froze suddenly then turned to Sam a malicious smile across her face, she reached forward and slowly teased his cock until it became hard then she stood back looking him over before saying ' Aw does little Sammy like this, his little dickie is all hard'. By this time more people had gathered, barely anyone had seen what had happened to make Sam hard. Mark thought hard about what he should do next he eventually decided against his original plan and decided to do something else, he turned his attention to Jamie the most popular guy in school focusing all his attention on him this time he made the jock walk upto Sam Jamie unzipped his Jeans taking his large cock out he forced it into Sam's mouth making him suck it, Sam looked on the verge of tears as Jamie forced Sam to suck him until he cum in Sam's mouth, laughing as he makes Sam swallow the cum he then pisses all over Sam before Mark gives him back control then starts laughing with the rest of the school.

admireu4ever
02-18-2008, 04:06 PM
"Guys, follow me." Jake had then ran into a empty classroom. "We must make a swear that we won't use our powers against each other and we will use them only to benefit ourselves and we can tell NO ONE." As the other boys noded they planned their next move.

Kitty
02-19-2008, 03:11 AM
nie story so far and funny

Dollface
02-27-2008, 03:39 AM
I love it but you would think that with three authors they would be able to finish it, or at least write the next part

TeenSlave
02-27-2008, 12:24 PM
guess we were all kinda hopin one of the other two would do the next part lol